[Complete] Woodcraft Boys at Sunset Island by May Folwell Hoisington and Lillian Elizabeth Roy - lt

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » September 25th, 2018, 1:33 pm

Hi Lynnet,
In the MW ellies' section of chapter 9 is put down as chapter 8, making everything else jump a number. (That explains why GillH was signed up for chapter 8 according to the feed when, according to the MW, ellies was signed up for it instead.) I'm not quite sure how to fix that.
Thanks,
~JayKitty

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » September 25th, 2018, 2:06 pm

Ellies,
You have a very sweet reading voice! I just have some PL notes for chapter 9:

Throughout the song 'Strike, Strike the Bell' you say 'Refrain'. I would cut that as that is technically not part of the song.
I would rerecord this song only, and nothing else (Strike, Strike the Bell) if it's not too much trouble. I'd recommend singing it straight through with no interruptions, breaks, or skipping around. I know it's more like a traditional song if you go to the verse, and refrain, and chorus, and back again (etc) but I'd prefer it if it was simply sang straight through as it is written on Gutenberg.com.
Thank you for your upload, chapter 9 sounds fantastic!

Post by **Lynnet** » September 25th, 2018, 4:33 pm

Chapters 8 and 9 were accidentally switched, causing the confusion. I have switched them back, and the files are as they should be.

ellies · Post by **ellies** » September 26th, 2018, 9:46 am

JayKitty76 wrote: ↑September 25th, 2018, 2:06 pm Ellies,
You have a very sweet reading voice! I just have some PL notes for chapter 9:

Throughout the song 'Strike, Strike the Bell' you say 'Refrain'. I would cut that as that is technically not part of the song.
I would rerecord this song only, and nothing else (Strike, Strike the Bell) if it's not too much trouble. I'd recommend singing it straight through with no interruptions, breaks, or skipping around. I know it's more like a traditional song if you go to the verse, and refrain, and chorus, and back again (etc) but I'd prefer it if it was simply sang straight through as it is written on Gutenberg.com.
Thank you for your upload, chapter 9 sounds fantastic!

thank you! I cannot read music at all, but can pick up tunes fairly easily. I read from kindle, so it shows up slightly differently than the Gutenberg one. No problem at all, i can re-record that section tomorrow (Thursday and will re-post!

ellies

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » September 26th, 2018, 12:08 pm

ellies wrote: ↑September 26th, 2018, 9:46 am
JayKitty76 wrote: ↑September 25th, 2018, 2:06 pm Ellies,
You have a very sweet reading voice! I just have some PL notes for chapter 9:

Throughout the song 'Strike, Strike the Bell' you say 'Refrain'. I would cut that as that is technically not part of the song.
I would rerecord this song only, and nothing else (Strike, Strike the Bell) if it's not too much trouble. I'd recommend singing it straight through with no interruptions, breaks, or skipping around. I know it's more like a traditional song if you go to the verse, and refrain, and chorus, and back again (etc) but I'd prefer it if it was simply sang straight through as it is written on Gutenberg.com.
Thank you for your upload, chapter 9 sounds fantastic!
thank you! I cannot read music at all, but can pick up tunes fairly easily. I read from kindle, so it shows up slightly differently than the Gutenberg one. No problem at all, i can re-record that section tomorrow (Thursday and will re-post!

ellies

Thank you ellies! I appreciate that

great job!
~JayKitty

ellies · Post by **ellies** » September 27th, 2018, 12:59 am

JayKitty76 wrote: ↑September 26th, 2018, 12:08 pm
ellies wrote: ↑September 26th, 2018, 9:46 am
JayKitty76 wrote: ↑September 25th, 2018, 2:06 pm Ellies,
You have a very sweet reading voice! I just have some PL notes for chapter 9:

Throughout the song 'Strike, Strike the Bell' you say 'Refrain'. I would cut that as that is technically not part of the song.
I would rerecord this song only, and nothing else (Strike, Strike the Bell) if it's not too much trouble. I'd recommend singing it straight through with no interruptions, breaks, or skipping around. I know it's more like a traditional song if you go to the verse, and refrain, and chorus, and back again (etc) but I'd prefer it if it was simply sang straight through as it is written on Gutenberg.com.
Thank you for your upload, chapter 9 sounds fantastic!
thank you! I cannot read music at all, but can pick up tunes fairly easily. I read from kindle, so it shows up slightly differently than the Gutenberg one. No problem at all, i can re-record that section tomorrow (Thursday and will re-post!

ellies
Thank you ellies! I appreciate that great job!
~JayKitty

here goes. not quite as well sung as last time, but I tried!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_09_hoisington_128kb.mp3 24:25

thanks
ellies

Post by **Lynnet** » September 27th, 2018, 6:59 am

ellies wrote: ↑September 27th, 2018, 12:59 am
JayKitty76 wrote: ↑September 26th, 2018, 12:08 pm
ellies wrote: ↑September 26th, 2018, 9:46 am

thank you! I cannot read music at all, but can pick up tunes fairly easily. I read from kindle, so it shows up slightly differently than the Gutenberg one. No problem at all, i can re-record that section tomorrow (Thursday and will re-post!

ellies
Thank you ellies! I appreciate that great job!
~JayKitty

here goes. not quite as well sung as last time, but I tried!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_09_hoisington_128kb.mp3 24:25

thanks
ellies

Thank you

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » September 27th, 2018, 12:57 pm

Ellies,
Chapter 9 is absolutely perfect! Lovely song

Thank you for your upload, and good job!

Thanks,
~JayKitty

clarksonr · Post by **clarksonr** » September 27th, 2018, 6:22 pm

Here is Chapter 5 coming in at 19:16 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

Post by **Lynnet** » September 27th, 2018, 6:44 pm

clarksonr wrote: ↑September 27th, 2018, 6:22 pm Here is Chapter 5 coming in at 19:16 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

Thank you

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » September 28th, 2018, 11:56 am

clarksonr wrote: ↑September 27th, 2018, 6:22 pm Here is Chapter 5 coming in at 19:16 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

Thank you for our final upload.
~JayKitty76

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » October 3rd, 2018, 2:26 pm

Hi clarksonr,
Chapter 5 is very well read. You have a fantastic reading speed, it keeps the listeners very interested, good job. I just have a couple PL notes for it:

0:28~ you seem to have missed the chapter title ('Winning the Degree of Shingebis').

18:56~ you said 'Why is it', implying the quote was a question, instead of the direct exclamation of 'Why, it is..'.

Good job, and thank you for our final chapter.

~JayKitty76

clarksonr · Post by **clarksonr** » October 3rd, 2018, 5:22 pm

JayKitty76 wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2018, 2:26 pm Hi clarksonr,
Chapter 5 is very well read. You have a fantastic reading speed, it keeps the listeners very interested, good job. I just have a couple PL notes for it:

0:28~ you seem to have missed the chapter title ('Winning the Degree of Shingebis').

18:56~ you said 'Why is it', implying the quote was a question, instead of the direct exclamation of 'Why, it is..'.

Good job, and thank you for our final chapter.

~JayKitty76

Thank you, here is the updated version with a new time of 19:17: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

Post by **Lynnet** » October 3rd, 2018, 5:25 pm

clarksonr wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2018, 5:22 pm
JayKitty76 wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2018, 2:26 pm Hi clarksonr,
Chapter 5 is very well read. You have a fantastic reading speed, it keeps the listeners very interested, good job. I just have a couple PL notes for it:

0:28~ you seem to have missed the chapter title ('Winning the Degree of Shingebis').

18:56~ you said 'Why is it', implying the quote was a question, instead of the direct exclamation of 'Why, it is..'.

Good job, and thank you for our final chapter.

~JayKitty76
Thank you, here is the updated version with a new time of 19:17: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

Thank you

JayKitty76 · Post by **JayKitty76** » October 3rd, 2018, 5:41 pm

Clarksonr,
Chapter 5 is PL OK.