I just had a listen to this interesting story. And I think you did a wonderful job with all the Greek names
They sound quite accurate to my ears at least
Wonderfully narrated, all of it, it was a pleasure to listen to.
I only have a few notes to make, nothing difficult:
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at 3:19: (p. 113) could you please place the footnote immediately after the words "two oboli to every one"
at 3:11. This also enables you to stick to our "do not change what the author wrote"-rule, so just say "
Footnote - about eight cents - End of Footnote".
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at 5:06: (p. 114) "by the party which Themistocles
headed" - you say "
heeded" which is a change in meaning
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at 14:18: between the end of the story and the final disclaimer, this
pause seems too long. 2 seconds is fully enough.
> also careful at the end, we should leave
5 seconds. You have 6 here, which is ok, you don't need to change it this time, but don't let them become even longer
Thanks for yet another informative story
Sonia