COMPLETE Open The Door by Catherine Carswell - ke
I am sorry, I am not available this week but would try to respond. Ann, we were waiting for you to conferm that Jeniffer can take chapter 2, section 3. However you did not conferm, and it was yours, so I will use that recording.
Jeniffer, I am terebly sorry, but next time, please wait for Ann's confirmation before starting. Not only mine, as I could not releace a claim without a reader's consent. Unless I miss understood you, and you requested chapter 2. But as far as I remember you requested section 2 and this is wha I gave you.
I suggest that, in order to avoid unplesentness, the two of you decide which section to use according to your judgement.
Jeniffer, I am terebly sorry, but next time, please wait for Ann's confirmation before starting. Not only mine, as I could not releace a claim without a reader's consent. Unless I miss understood you, and you requested chapter 2. But as far as I remember you requested section 2 and this is wha I gave you.
I suggest that, in order to avoid unplesentness, the two of you decide which section to use according to your judgement.
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That's OK Miss Stav
I am not upset - just we have had a misunderstanding !. I am quite happy that you have used Ann's recording of Chapter 2. It was fun and good practice for me to read it anyway. I do not think of it as wasted time at all.
I am quite content to wait until you get Asphodell up and running. That sounds most interesting.
Cheers
Jennifer
I am not upset - just we have had a misunderstanding !. I am quite happy that you have used Ann's recording of Chapter 2. It was fun and good practice for me to read it anyway. I do not think of it as wasted time at all.
I am quite content to wait until you get Asphodell up and running. That sounds most interesting.
Cheers
Jennifer
Asphedall is running and waiting for you, and if you want another chapter from this book just let me know.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.
Hi Nedge,
For Section 3, there are a few tiny edits to be made.
- 1:30 Repeat of “and their stone areas” = Please remove.
- 13:35 Mispronunciation “Dunvartie” instead of Duntarvie. = Please correct.
- 13:55 Mispronunciation “Dunvartie” instead of Duntarvie. = Please correct. (In all other instances, except for these two, you say Duntarvie.)
- 20:25 Cheek replaced with “Head,” but this does not alter the meaning or imagery, so either word should be suitable per the requirements of the project.
These are very minor concerns, so great work, especially for a longer section. I’m looking forward to your other readings.
Thanks a lot,
Kurt
For Section 3, there are a few tiny edits to be made.
- 1:30 Repeat of “and their stone areas” = Please remove.
- 13:35 Mispronunciation “Dunvartie” instead of Duntarvie. = Please correct.
- 13:55 Mispronunciation “Dunvartie” instead of Duntarvie. = Please correct. (In all other instances, except for these two, you say Duntarvie.)
- 20:25 Cheek replaced with “Head,” but this does not alter the meaning or imagery, so either word should be suitable per the requirements of the project.
These are very minor concerns, so great work, especially for a longer section. I’m looking forward to your other readings.
Thanks a lot,
Kurt
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Hi,
May I please read section 10?
First recording, so I'll just stick to one section until I get feedback.
Thanks,
Lynne
May I please read section 10?
First recording, so I'll just stick to one section until I get feedback.
Thanks,
Lynne