thankyou so much for checking! I thought I had been thorough with editing, but never mind!JayKitty76 wrote: ↑August 27th, 2018, 2:56 pmHi ellies,
Here are the PL notes for chapter 3:
04:52-53 I noticed you missed the word 'to' or it isn't quite clear.
14:47 I noticed you said 'they' instead of 'that'.
20:15-16 I noticed you repeated the words 'old craft' twice. Perhaps you can edit one of the repeats out?
23:27 You said 'traveling', then corrected it and said 'trawling'.
Your pronounciation is excellent, and so is your timing. Thank you for your upload.
I have corrected everything you mentioned and uploaded again.
hopefully should be ok now.