[Complete] Shaggy Man in Oz - dlo

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lomond
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Greetings -

Notes on Section 10:

Just a couple of things that need touching up:

Time: 05:38 Text has "You will come with me". Reading has "Will you come with me".

Time: 10:40 Text has "advanced to the door, and removing a large". Reading repeats the word "and".

Everything else is just fine.

If this were made into a movie, I wonder who would be perfect for the role of Lady Cue. Hmmmm.

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Hi!

Here are my 2 sections back after editing -

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/shaggymaninoz_08_snow_128kb.mp3 - 27:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/shaggymaninoz_10_snow_128kb.mp3 - 14:16

Please note in Section 10 I only did the 2nd edit as this is a standard PL and the 1st comment does not affect the story outcome - just a reversal of words.

Lynda
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Post by lomond »

Lmnei wrote: August 2nd, 2018, 7:46 pm
Please note in Section 10 I only did the 2nd edit as this is a standard PL and the 1st comment does not affect the story outcome - just a reversal of words.

Lynda
Greetings -

No problem with only doing the one edit. Sometimes I will point something out and leave it to the reader to decide if it worth fixing. Thanks for taking on a number of sections in this effort.

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Thanks folks, that's all good - word perfect is not required for this project.
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Greetings -

Sections 13 and 15 have been added to the list of PL OK sections.

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Thanks Lomond! You're powering through them!

I think there will be some orphaned sections soon, so if anyone on the thread wants to claim more sections, watch this space!
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Greetings -

Sections 16 and 17 have been duly inspected and found to be PL OK.

Seven sections and an edit and we will be done with Tom, Twink, and Twiffle's adventures in and about the land of Oz. :)

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Post by Elizabby »

Thanks Lomond!

I have messaged the two readers who have not logged in for over a month each. If they don't respond those sections will be orphaned and we will start again with new claims.

Actually, I'll orphan fatobot's claim down to a single section - this is why I usually prefer new readers to claim one section at a time.
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Sections 21-23 are orphaned.
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I will take the orphaned chapters!

Lynda
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Great! Thanks!
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So quick! I'm impressed!
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Sections 7 and 24 are orphaned after no response to PMs.
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Adoption agency open!

I will take those too!

Lynda
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