COMPLETE The Blue Aunt by Eliza White -ck

Post by **Carolin** » June 17th, 2018, 12:03 am

Thank you

Post by **Carolin** » June 17th, 2018, 12:04 am

we have an orphan!

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 17th, 2018, 12:14 am

I can do the orphaned chapter, no problem, sign me up!
ellies

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 17th, 2018, 2:03 am

Here is chapter 12.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/theblueaunt_12_white.mp3 20:33

thanks
ellies

Post by **Carolin** » June 17th, 2018, 11:06 pm

Thank you

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 17th, 2018, 11:08 pm

I will try to do these PLs tomorrow. I should have time, I just hope I don't forget. Maybe somebody should PM me a reminder.

I'm leaving town for a week on Tuesday, so if I don't get PL these tomorrow, they'll be waiting for some time.

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 18th, 2018, 12:48 am

Thank you so much, no problem at all. I will get on with some other readings in the mean time.
best wishes
ellies

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 18th, 2018, 7:00 pm

Chapter 11:

2:07 "K-A-T" This is optional, but I would recommend saying the letters here, not just articulating the sounds. The point of this dialogue, I think, is the proper spelling of the word "cat," so I think reading the letters makes more sense.
There is a long pause (about 3-4 seconds) at about 3:26. This should be trimmed down.
A pause mid-sentence at about 3:50. "...children our size to give......fifty cents."
A long pause (about 3 seconds) at 3:59.
A pause mid-sentence at about 4:39. "I thought I could spell my own cat......the way I liked."
Very long pause (7-8 seconds) at about 5:12.
Stumble at about 6:36 "...does not kiss people generally." You may be able to just cut out the first "kiss" without too much trouble.

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 18th, 2018, 7:05 pm

Chapter 10 PL ok.

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 19th, 2018, 1:39 am

thanks for reviewing. I will go through everything you mentioned and correct it.
will re-post shortly, but realise you are away for a bit.
ellies

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 19th, 2018, 4:01 am

Hi this is chapter 11 again, corrected. I hope this is better, have taken away gaps of silence etc.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/theblueaunt_11_white.mp3 11:38

thanks
ellies

Post by **Carolin** » June 19th, 2018, 4:33 am

Thank you both

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 19th, 2018, 8:03 am

Hi Carolin, here is chapter 13.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/theblueaunt_13_white.mp3 16:48

thanks
ellies

Post by **linny** » June 20th, 2018, 2:31 pm

Carolin,
I PMed with Devorah and I can help PL here while she is away.

ellies · Post by **ellies** » June 20th, 2018, 4:00 pm

Hi, I am going to have to re-record chapter 8! I recorded it, went to upload it and nowhere to be found on my computer! I assume I forgot to save this one

So I will post the missing chapter soon!
ellies