Good readingelizaswann wrote: ↑June 13th, 2018, 4:26 am Hi Carolin,
i'm so sorry for all the issues.
here is the updated link for section 48, In a Storm:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/seapoems_48_rice_128kb.mp3
duration: 0:56
Eliza
There are several issues that need attention, however, as follows:
Needs “To a Petrel” at the beginning
0:37 to end == someone shouting in the background.
Closing silence is too long at 7 secs. Should be closer to 5.
The background voices might pass in a long prose piece, but in a short poem, they are very noticeable and distracting. Since this poem is so short, you might consider a new recording.
Just upload the new file under the same name the post the link and new file length here, and I'll check it again.