Pleased to hear your positive feedback

At 17 secs - no, I do actually say "A vanished hand". But I'll rerecord the intro, didn't realise I hadn't followed the required wording accurately.
9:43 - I've listened a few times now and I just hear "I'll take them out to make room for other things". But I'm happy to re-record if you think it needs to be clearer.
Thanks for the suggestion regarding pauses. I thought I was pacing things, good to get someone else's perspective on this. Still need to find my rhythm!
So, lots to be getting on with. I'll do these edits, then look forward to reading chapter 4.
Thanks again for all your help

Magz