COMPLETE! A Vanished Hand by Sarah Doudney - rap

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magz
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Post by magz » May 9th, 2018, 3:40 pm

Hi schrm,

Pleased to hear your positive feedback :clap:

At 17 secs - no, I do actually say "A vanished hand". But I'll rerecord the intro, didn't realise I hadn't followed the required wording accurately.

9:43 - I've listened a few times now and I just hear "I'll take them out to make room for other things". But I'm happy to re-record if you think it needs to be clearer.

Thanks for the suggestion regarding pauses. I thought I was pacing things, good to get someone else's perspective on this. Still need to find my rhythm!

So, lots to be getting on with. I'll do these edits, then look forward to reading chapter 4.

Thanks again for all your help :thumbs:

Magz

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Post by magz » May 9th, 2018, 3:47 pm

@magz, please: under which name do you want to read, here? do you want to link a blog or webpage on your reader-page?
(i remember to hear your wish in the testfile, but please do write it down here.
Hello again, regarding names, I've registered here as magz, but used my full name in the reading. That would be my preference, it's 'Maggie Mizzi'. Would it be ok to link to a website at a later stage? I've got www.maggiemizzi.uk but it's still a work in progress.

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Post by magz » May 9th, 2018, 3:50 pm

miss stav wrote:
May 9th, 2018, 1:48 am
magz wrote:
May 8th, 2018, 5:09 pm
If Chapter 1 is ok and doesn't need to be re-recorded, could I do chapter 4 next?

Sure, chapter 4 is all yours. I aprisiate your dedication.
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Post by miss stav » May 9th, 2018, 6:49 pm

Hi Mag,
of course, you can link to a websight when ever you like. It doesn't have to be now.
Stav.
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Post by miss stav » May 9th, 2018, 6:50 pm

Hi Mag,
of course, you can link to a websight when ever you like. It doesn't have to be now.
Stav.
Love short stories? Try Actions And Reactions. Admire Edith Wharton? See A Son At The Front. And for the clean up month, let's push The Heavonly Twins

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Post by schrm » May 9th, 2018, 8:17 pm

good morning maggie,

thank you for your feedback, maggie - and thank you for your willingness to change the two parts, despite not hearing the same.
i think, your recording will get better - also, "low level of skills" listeners will profit by that.
(just to be clear about that: most of us read a sentence or a paragraph at most, and cut and paste it. please, dont rerecord all of the text!)
your reader page: https://librivox.org/reader/12497

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Post by magz » May 10th, 2018, 12:27 am

Thanks schrm and Stav.

Yes, will cut and paste the two parts. And will also listen out for long pauses for shortening.

I have done recordings before but mostly for functional purposes, never a whole chapter of a book. And when doing home recordings I usually send the sound files to others for editing, so this is a whole new learning experience. Always good to do.

Have a good day :)

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Post by magz » May 10th, 2018, 12:28 am

And thanks for my reader page! :clap:

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Post by 2839reader » May 10th, 2018, 9:08 am

Yes 8 9 and 10 ok thanks.
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Post by miss stav » May 10th, 2018, 2:47 pm

Wonderful. Thank you.
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Post by jessieyun0404 » May 10th, 2018, 5:50 pm

miss stav wrote:
May 8th, 2018, 4:48 am
Ok, I will be the bad guy. Jessie, please fix the end of the intro. As a listener, I am obssesed about consistancy. If you already fix the bit rate, I don't think it would be much of a problem. But if it is, just keep it as is, ok?
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Post by jenno » May 11th, 2018, 12:10 am

could I claim chapters 11, 12, 13 please

Jennifer

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Post by miss stav » May 11th, 2018, 1:29 am

Hi Jennifer,
thanks a lot for chapter 7. I am glad you are enjoying the book. Sure, 11, 12 and 13 are all yours. Have fun,
Stav.

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Post by schrm » May 11th, 2018, 11:42 am

jenno wrote:
May 11th, 2018, 12:10 am
could I claim chapters 11, 12, 13 please

Jennifer
hi,

chapters 11, 12 and 13 are assigned to jennifer/jenno,
pl chapter 7 is ok!


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