[COMPLETE] Nevi’im (JPSA) 06: Joshua - tg

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » April 28th, 2018, 1:37 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/holyscripturesjoshua_04_jpsa_128kb.mp3

13:42

linny · Post by **linny** » April 29th, 2018, 8:13 am

Hi Scarlett,
Lovely job! Here are your PL notes:

6:20 (10:5) Therefore the five kings of the Amorites, the king of Jerusalem, the king of Hebron, the king of Jarmuth, the king of Lachish, the king of Eglon, gathered themselves together, and went up, they and all their hosts,
I hear and
(this is repeated around 9:45 if you want to try a cut/paste instead of recording)

6:37 (10:6) And the men of Gibeon sent unto Joshua to the camp to Gilgal, saying: ‘Slack not thy hands from they servants; come up to us quickly, and save us, and help us;
I hear servant … singular instead of plural.

8:08 (10.13) Is not this written in the book of Jashar? And the sun stayed in the mist of heaven, and hasted not to go down about a whole day.
I hear hastened

9:19 (10.22) Then said Joshua: ‘Open the mouth of the cave, and bring forth those five kings unto me out of the cave.’
I hear save

10:53 (10:29) And Joshua passed from Makkedah, and all Israel with him, unto Libnah, and fought against Livnah.
I hear pressed

13:34 End of Joshua, chapter 10
I hear section 4

Scarlet576 · Post by **Scarlet576** » April 29th, 2018, 12:03 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/holyscripturesjoshua_04_jpsa_128kb.mp3

ready for spot PL

linny · Post by **linny** » April 30th, 2018, 5:57 am

Section 4 is spot check PL OK

Great job on the editing.

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » May 2nd, 2018, 6:41 am

May I read the remaining sections?

linny · Post by **linny** » May 2nd, 2018, 7:02 am

Certainly! Thank you, Kristin.

linny · Post by **linny** » May 2nd, 2018, 7:04 am

Tricia, we are full.

AtalieH · Post by **AtalieH** » May 3rd, 2018, 12:41 pm

linny wrote: ↑April 28th, 2018, 9:16 am Atalie, I haven't PLed for you before. I know some readers don't like to listen to their work before they post. Since this is a word perfect project I do highly recommend that after you have edited your section that you listen while following the text. This should pick up most of the little word changes.

Have fun everyone! I really appreciate your help on this project.

Thanks Linny, I will do that. I am looking forward to this!

AtalieH · Post by **AtalieH** » May 3rd, 2018, 7:25 pm

Here is section 1, I hope all is as it should be!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/holyscripturesjoshua_01_jpsa_128kb.mp3 3:31

linny · Post by **linny** » May 4th, 2018, 7:21 am

Atalie,
Lovely job. Thank you.

For future recordings, you might consider seeing if you can eliminate the singing birds from the background (close the window or move the cage during recording).

Only a couple of PL notes to be addressed.
The volume is very low. Please amplify by 5dB.

1:52 (1:9) Be strong and of good courage; be not affrighted, neither by thou dismayed; for the Lord thy G_d is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
I hear afraid

Post by **ColleenMc** » May 4th, 2018, 2:41 pm

I'm sorry to do this, but I have to release the two sections I claimed. I just can't wrap my tongue around these names and the phrasing! I will try again in another book that is not quite so choked with place names!

Thanks,
Colleen

linny · Post by **linny** » May 5th, 2018, 5:32 am

No problem. Thank you for letting me know.

Judges will be next. Hopefully you can join then.

linny · Post by **linny** » May 5th, 2018, 5:34 am

Hi Tricia,
Back to readers wanted, please.

Post by **TriciaG** » May 5th, 2018, 7:18 am

Done.

AtalieH · Post by **AtalieH** » May 13th, 2018, 2:15 pm

Here is section 01 with the necessary changes made.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/holyscripturesjoshua_01_jpsa_128kb.mp3 3:31