COMPLETE[PLAY]The Notorious Mrs. Ebbsmith by Pinero - thw

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Post by ToddHW » March 20th, 2018, 3:42 pm

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March 20th, 2018, 3:10 pm
Claiming and posting Sir Sandford Cleeve https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_sirsandford_4_128kb.mp3
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Post by Kitty » March 21st, 2018, 5:26 am

RobBoard wrote:
March 20th, 2018, 3:10 pm
Claiming and posting Sir Sandford Cleeve https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_sirsandford_4_128kb.mp3
ah our very first role in :D so this is how you sound pompously, Rob :mrgreen: well at least at the beginning, later on he is struggling to get a word in when Sybil is speaking :lol: Great acting ! Thanks, this is totally PL ok.

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Post by RobMarland » March 21st, 2018, 5:49 am

Kitty wrote:
March 21st, 2018, 5:26 am
RobBoard wrote:
March 20th, 2018, 3:10 pm
Claiming and posting Sir Sandford Cleeve https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_sirsandford_4_128kb.mp3
ah our very first role in :D so this is how you sound pompously, Rob :mrgreen: well at least at the beginning, later on he is struggling to get a word in when Sybil is speaking :lol: Great acting ! Thanks, this is totally PL ok.

Sonia
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Post by leanneyauyau » March 24th, 2018, 5:35 am

May I claim Sybil Cleeve?
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Post by ToddHW » March 24th, 2018, 8:19 am

leanneyauyau wrote:
March 24th, 2018, 5:35 am
May I claim Sybil Cleeve?
Thank you.

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Post by alanmapstone » March 24th, 2018, 11:29 am

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Post by alanmapstone » March 25th, 2018, 10:31 am

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Post by ToddHW » March 25th, 2018, 10:48 am

Thank you.

Fortune Act 1 is PL OK - nice characterization, Alan.

But there are some more lines for Fortune later in Act 2
FORTUNE. I beg your pardon, sir.

LUCAS. Well?

FORTUNE. It is pas' ze time for you to dress for dinner.
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Post by Kitty » March 26th, 2018, 12:10 am

thank you, Todd, for helping me out here over the weekend :9: I had a great time and now I'm back, starting to work off my backload. This will take me some time :shock:

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Post by francescosardegna » March 26th, 2018, 4:57 am


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Post by Kitty » March 26th, 2018, 6:16 am

ah Francesco, I was already curious to hear the Venetian accent :D I'm happy that I would have understood everything, you are speaking very clearly :thumbs:

I can mark Act 1 already PL ok. The voice credit was not complete, but since there is nothing else wrong, you can well give us the voice credit in Act 2.

For Act 2, you missed a few of your lines:

> at 0:03: could you please give us the entire character description for the voice credit: “Antonio Poppi, Venetian servant

> at about 0:07: please insert missing quote: “Uno scatolone per la Signora

> at about 0:16: missing line: “Il padrone.”

Oh and as for file-naming, you don't need to unclude the brackets [ ... ], these were only in the example. Simply name it notoriousmrsebbsmith_antonio_2_128kb

thanks, and great job for your first stage play !!! Hopefully more to come. :D

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Post by francescosardegna » March 26th, 2018, 6:46 am

Ciao Kitty,

I uploaded a new reading of act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_antonio_2_128kb.mp3

The pronounciation is far more venetian.

Have a nice day

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Post by Kitty » March 26th, 2018, 6:51 am

francescosardegna wrote:
March 26th, 2018, 6:46 am
I uploaded a new reading of act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_antonio_2_128kb.mp3
ah thank you, that was quickly corrected. Yes now all the lines are in and the voice credit is complete. PL ok.

Many thanks for bringing such a great local accent into this play. I will strive to give my best at my own accent for my part but I know I will never sound like a native speaker. :oops:

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Post by alanmapstone » March 26th, 2018, 8:08 am

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Post by Kitty » March 26th, 2018, 8:23 am

alanmapstone wrote:
March 26th, 2018, 8:08 am
Fortune act2 extra lines
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/notoriousmrsebbsmith_fortune_2extra.mp3
hehe Alan, your Fortune is not the very sharpest, judging from his speech. :lol: I like it and now I'm curious to hear the rest of the performance, which Todd helpfully snatched away from me.

This part is PL ok, in any case. Thanks !

Sonia

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