COMPLETE The Ghost Ship by Richard Middleton -ck
Thank you
Carolin
Chapter 5 - A Tragedy in Little is PL ready:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_05_middleton_128kb.mp3
Time is 19:25.
This is only my second, so feedback is greatly to be wished.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_05_middleton_128kb.mp3
Time is 19:25.
This is only my second, so feedback is greatly to be wished.
Thank you
Carolin
Hello! Apologies for the delays in PLing, real life was busy last weekend but now that another weekend has come along, I am able to do some catching up. I proof listened to Chapters 1, 5, and a relistened to 17, notes are below.
Chapter 1
There are a number of long pauses that are long enough that they seem awkward. Please trim the pauses down a little to make them sound more natural. The pauses I noticed were at times:
4:31
4:51
7:36
25:03
26:57
There were also some repeats of text that have not been completely edited out at the following times:
11:44 Repeat of "But we didn't mix much with the ghosts at any time, all except an idiot lad there was in the village"
13:36 "But just then in came butcher" repeats
18:22 "and he did not shake his head very hard when the captain took down"
18:41 "and I felt that it was ridiculous to blame the l--"
28:53 "Captain had been more of a pirate than a gentleman mariner"
Chapter 5
At time...
0:22 Please include the chapter title "A Tragedy in Little" before reading "One"
6:27 A little repeat on "real- really sleepy"
10:01 Another small repeat "for it made, it made him feel fidgety"
Chapter 17 is PL OK! Just a note for future recordings, however, that it is almost always preferable for you to edit the recording you first turn in over re-recording. If you edit the original and reupload it, the PLer only needs to check on the things noted in the PL Notes before OKing it. However, because you rerecorded, I needed to listen to the whole thing over again in order to OK it. Your future PLers will appreciate the time-saver!
Editing tip for newbies: if you start editing from the changes at the end of the recording and move toward the beginning, the times I noted with issues will remain accurate throughout your editing session.
Thank you all!
Jill
Chapter 1
There are a number of long pauses that are long enough that they seem awkward. Please trim the pauses down a little to make them sound more natural. The pauses I noticed were at times:
4:31
4:51
7:36
25:03
26:57
There were also some repeats of text that have not been completely edited out at the following times:
11:44 Repeat of "But we didn't mix much with the ghosts at any time, all except an idiot lad there was in the village"
13:36 "But just then in came butcher" repeats
18:22 "and he did not shake his head very hard when the captain took down"
18:41 "and I felt that it was ridiculous to blame the l--"
28:53 "Captain had been more of a pirate than a gentleman mariner"
Chapter 5
At time...
0:22 Please include the chapter title "A Tragedy in Little" before reading "One"
6:27 A little repeat on "real- really sleepy"
10:01 Another small repeat "for it made, it made him feel fidgety"
Chapter 17 is PL OK! Just a note for future recordings, however, that it is almost always preferable for you to edit the recording you first turn in over re-recording. If you edit the original and reupload it, the PLer only needs to check on the things noted in the PL Notes before OKing it. However, because you rerecorded, I needed to listen to the whole thing over again in order to OK it. Your future PLers will appreciate the time-saver!
Editing tip for newbies: if you start editing from the changes at the end of the recording and move toward the beginning, the times I noted with issues will remain accurate throughout your editing session.
Thank you all!
Jill
Thank you jill!
Carolin
Hello! Here's chapter 9.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_09_middleton_128kb.mp3
It's 10:20 in duration. Chapter 12 is coming along - it's all recorded and hoping to edit tomorrow...
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_09_middleton_128kb.mp3
It's 10:20 in duration. Chapter 12 is coming along - it's all recorded and hoping to edit tomorrow...
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Thanks for the PL. Here's the corrected version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_01_middleton_128kb.mp3
Hope I caught all the pauses!
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_01_middleton_128kb.mp3
Hope I caught all the pauses!
Thank you both
Carolin
Hello again,
Here's chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_12_middleton_128kb.mp3
It's 19:08 long....
Here's chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_12_middleton_128kb.mp3
It's 19:08 long....
Thank you
Carolin
we have an orphan!
Carolin
re: 5, thanks for the notes, Jill. With corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_05_middleton_128kb.mp3
Note that the new time's 19:27 (with the addition of the chapter title at the beginning).
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_05_middleton_128kb.mp3
Note that the new time's 19:27 (with the addition of the chapter title at the beginning).
Thank you
Carolin
Chapter 9 is PL OK! Lovely job!Yuiopj wrote: ↑March 1st, 2018, 5:27 am Hello! Here's chapter 9.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/ghostship_09_middleton_128kb.mp3
It's 10:20 in duration. Chapter 12 is coming along - it's all recorded and hoping to edit tomorrow...
Jill