that would be my modus operandi as well
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that would be my modus operandi as well
excellent now and PL ok.Elizabby wrote:Here's the corrected Lady MacPhail Act 2, only the first line changed:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cabinetminister_ladymacphail_2.mp3
In Act 3, I noticed Lady MacPhail is extremely dramatic in her speeches LOL this coupled with the very dry replies by Sir Colin will provide some hilarious moments.
no, you did record it later, she says it twice. You forgot to say it in the beginning. I thought you may want to say it twice slightly different though, otherwise we could have done a copy/paste job
she is so exuberant and dramatic in those two sentences excellent
I totally agree with you thereI've also increased the contrast a bit between the "outside" and "inside" versions of "Take me to Colin!" I suppose there will need to be a stage direction anyway, but I always think it helps to carry as much expression as possible into the actual line.
That is what I do for Outside Voice as well.
you already finished Act 4 and luckily this time it was less long, compared to some of the other acts. Excellently narrated yet again. You manage to convey the appropriate anger in all the shaking and slapping that goes onsilverquill wrote: ↑February 28th, 2018, 10:13 am Here are stage directions for Act 4:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cabinetminister_stagedirections_4.mp3
I'm sorry, but I still found a few missing lines they're less and less which each act thoughI went through them one more tie and made a few small corrections and found a missed line that I missed one two previous passes. I hope I got them all this time.
oh ok...sorry you got confused. I'll wait patiently for the correct file then. I'll probably re-listen to it all once again, just to make sure. Luckily it's only 10 minutes and not 20silverquill wrote: ↑February 28th, 2018, 10:55 pmOh, my! Just looking at those -- I'm puzzled because I know I added some of those missing lines, and edited out the dark sash. I hope I didn't upload the unedited file . . . got confusing with several files open at once, but I will check everything out.