[COMPLETE][Solo] The Seen and the Unseen, by Richard Marsh - kit

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Kitty wrote: February 3rd, 2018, 2:06 am
linny wrote:6:13 I believe they are playing 15 men
I heard man
you know, I probably did, but what surprises me more is that you never took issue before, because I believe I never ever do a difference in sound with the words "man" and "men". I was always under the impression there is not really a difference. Not like with "woman" and "women". Also when I hear other people read the word "men" I don't think I notice much of a difference. :hmm:

Be that as it may, I think you probably mean I should draw out the "ehhh" a bit more in the middle (what else could it be ?) so here is the line again. Do you notice a difference ? I hope that is what you had in mind.
This sounds fine. I tend to pronounce the "en" portion as "in". To me it's the same pronunciation as the abbreviated min for minimum or minute.
Kitty wrote: February 3rd, 2018, 2:06 am
linny wrote:21:50 p166 We were so disconcerted by Mason’s total failure that they got the drop on us.
The second syllable is generally a kin v con.
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/disconcerted
thank you for the link, indeed I stressed on "con" instead of "cert", that's a new pronunciation I learnt :thumbs: I try to remember it. However I do not understand what you mean by "is generally a kin v con" :help:
Honestly, I have no idea. It was perfectly clear in my head...at the time. :oops: I'm sorry.
Spot check PL OK :thumbs:
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Kitty wrote: February 4th, 2018, 11:20 am Linny, I started on a new short story, in 3 chapters. Chapter 1 is quite short, so here it is, to whet your appetite. A bit of patience for the rest though...those parts are longer.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/seenandunseen_14_marsh_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 5:22 min.

Sonia
Great story set up!
PL OK
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linny wrote:This sounds fine. I tend to pronounce the "en" portion as "in". To me it's the same pronunciation as the abbreviated min for minimum or minute.
seriously, you read "men", the same way than "(wo)men" ? :shock: I need to pay closer attention when I hear that word next time spoken by others. I never noticed that.

Thanks for the PL ! I'm glad you liked the beginning. :D I notice I'm 50% through the book now. :9:

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Kitty wrote: February 5th, 2018, 12:47 am
linny wrote:This sounds fine. I tend to pronounce the "en" portion as "in". To me it's the same pronunciation as the abbreviated min for minimum or minute.
seriously, you read "men", the same way than "(wo)men" ? :shock: I need to pay closer attention when I hear that word next time spoken by others. I never noticed that.
That's that's how I hear/say it. Crazy language. :roll:
Kitty wrote: February 5th, 2018, 12:47 amI notice I'm 50% through the book now. :9:
Congratulations! :clap:
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in case you want to know how the story continues, here is the second part, where the ominous assassin shows up...

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/seenandunseen_15_marsh_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 20:04 min.

Phew, this editing took me the whole evening. Now my eyes are very tired. Time for bed.

Sonia
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I’m looking forward to it. I have classes this weekend so it probably won’t be before Monday.

I hope you recovered from your editing marathon.
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It should be an interesting evening.

15:39 What does it matter? Perhaps she has begun to love another, or without loving another, she has simply grown tired of me, or she finds my poverty more than she can bear.”
I hear began https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/begun Bee – gun
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linny wrote: February 12th, 2018, 7:44 amI hear began https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/begun Bee – gun
oh no, that was actually done on purpose. I know how to pronounce begun ;) but here I am saying it in my French persona, and this is the way many French would say the word. Their English 'u' sounds a bit like that.

If there is nothing else, I'll mark it ok. Thanks Linny, as always, for your diligence.

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Perfect. Thank you!
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and here the (maybe eagerly awaited) ending of The Assassin. And it's official now: Monsieur Gerbert is one of the most despicable little bastards that ever existed :evil:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/seenandunseen_16_marsh_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 15:29 min.

Sonia
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What the ....?

OK, your words were startling but I have to agree with you. I don't however understand why she did what she did? How did that action earn her 10k?

Oh, and yes, PL OK. (I almost forgot that little tidbit :oops: )
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linny wrote: February 21st, 2018, 12:58 pmI don't however understand why she did what she did? How did that action earn her 10k?
well I understood it that she finally found someone who was willing to pay the 10k if she killed someone: herself. :? I think that is what she wanted all along, if I interpret her words correctly. ("my death will be worth sth even if my life was not") It was a bit of a sick text...

Thanks for the PL :9:

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Kitty wrote: February 21st, 2018, 1:11 pmIt was a bit of a sick text...
I agree!
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Hi Linny, you probably already wondered what's up with me. Well, LV kept me quite busy so I had to to push my Solo on the backburner. But I managed to finish one new chapter finally. Here is the first part of an intriguing story about diamonds. It's hilarious how often and how quickly this flawed diamond changes hands in the first chapter :lol: Everybody tries to out-con the other.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/seenandunseen_17_marsh_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 16:26 min.

Hope all is well with you. Happy Easter !

Sonia
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the second part of the story was quite short, so here as special treat you get two sections in one day. :) But the last part with the solution of the diamond mystery will have to wait for a bit longer (sorry). It's a bigger chapter again.

As for the ominous Mr Fungst, I pictured him as the sort of typical German diamond trader living in Paris, so I gave it my best to give him a thick Germanic accent (wasn't easy after I spent my whole life getting rid of such an accent :lol: ) He sounds quite funny.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/seenandunseen_18_marsh_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 10:33 min.

Sonia
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