Lewis:
Another excellent effort. Two very small corrections:
At about 4:55 I heard "red beast" : I expected "red breast"
At about 18:46 I heard "fancy reigned" : I expected "fancy feigned"
Your corrections for Chapter 1 were seamless and excellent and it is now PL-OK!
Many thanks,
Philip
By the way, I expect to be away from the boards this coming Friday. I hope to be back on Saturday, but it may be a day or two.....
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Philip
Thanks for your feedback!
I've made the corrections to chapter 2: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_02_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 20:17)
I've also uploaded chapter 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:35)
Thanks,
Lewis
Thanks for your feedback!
I've made the corrections to chapter 2: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_02_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 20:17)
I've also uploaded chapter 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:35)
Thanks,
Lewis
Got it done early. Just a couple of small things in Section 3.
At 21:49 the phrase "which are filled about sunset" is omitted.
At 30:51 "for the depth of an inch or two into the water of the drain" is omitted.
Otherwise, another beautiful read.
Many thanks,
Philip
At 21:49 the phrase "which are filled about sunset" is omitted.
At 30:51 "for the depth of an inch or two into the water of the drain" is omitted.
Otherwise, another beautiful read.
Many thanks,
Philip
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Thanks! I've now made the corrections to chapter 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:40)
I've also uploaded the final three sections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_04_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:20)
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 25:05)
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_06_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:24)
Thanks!
Lewis
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:40)
I've also uploaded the final three sections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_04_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:20)
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 25:05)
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_06_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:24)
Thanks!
Lewis
Lewis!
Sections 3,4, and 6 are PL-OK! Nicely done!
Three short corrections in Section 5:
at 1:33 the phrase "partly on account of the pavement" is omitted.
at 1:59 the phrase "are those of small carts" is omitted.
at 14:31 the phrase "the arctic foxes leave their holes" is omitted.
Many thanks,
Philip
Sections 3,4, and 6 are PL-OK! Nicely done!
Three short corrections in Section 5:
at 1:33 the phrase "partly on account of the pavement" is omitted.
at 1:59 the phrase "are those of small carts" is omitted.
at 14:31 the phrase "the arctic foxes leave their holes" is omitted.
Many thanks,
Philip
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Thanks!
Corrections have been made to chapter 5: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3
Duration is now 25:10
Corrections have been made to chapter 5: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3
Duration is now 25:10
Congratulations, Lewis!
Your first solo for Librivox is complete!! (A fancy way of saying Section 5 is PL-OK.)
Thank you for the privilege of listening to your reading.
Phil, as always, a joy to work with you.
See you on the boards,
Philip
Your first solo for Librivox is complete!! (A fancy way of saying Section 5 is PL-OK.)
Thank you for the privilege of listening to your reading.
Phil, as always, a joy to work with you.
See you on the boards,
Philip
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This frosty project is now in our catalog at https://librivox.org/frostiana-or-a-history-of-the-river-thames-in-a-frozen-state-by-george-davis/
A very big congrats to the first time soloist for doing such a bang up great job!! and of course thanks to Philip our intrepid DPL.
A very big congrats to the first time soloist for doing such a bang up great job!! and of course thanks to Philip our intrepid DPL.