[COMPLETE] Frostiana by George Davis - philc

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » January 31st, 2018, 6:03 pm

Lewis:

Another excellent effort. Two very small corrections:

At about 4:55 I heard "red beast" : I expected "red breast"
At about 18:46 I heard "fancy reigned" : I expected "fancy feigned"

Your corrections for Chapter 1 were seamless and excellent and it is now PL-OK!

Many thanks,

Philip

By the way, I expect to be away from the boards this coming Friday. I hope to be back on Saturday, but it may be a day or two.....

PhileasBlogg · Post by **PhileasBlogg** » February 2nd, 2018, 9:11 pm

Philip

Thanks for your feedback!

I've made the corrections to chapter 2: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_02_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 20:17)
I've also uploaded chapter 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:35)

Thanks,
Lewis

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 4th, 2018, 12:45 pm

Lewis:

Section 2 is now PL-OK! Nicely done. (I'll try to have Section 3 out sometime tomorrow.)

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 4th, 2018, 3:17 pm

Got it done early. Just a couple of small things in Section 3.

At 21:49 the phrase "which are filled about sunset" is omitted.
At 30:51 "for the depth of an inch or two into the water of the drain" is omitted.

Otherwise, another beautiful read.

Many thanks,

Philip

PhileasBlogg · Post by **PhileasBlogg** » February 6th, 2018, 12:04 am

Thanks! I've now made the corrections to chapter 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_03_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 37:40)

I've also uploaded the final three sections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_04_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:20)

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 25:05)

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_06_davis_128kb.mp3 (duration 9:24)

Thanks!
Lewis

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 6th, 2018, 11:52 am

Lewis!

Sections 3,4, and 6 are PL-OK! Nicely done!

Three short corrections in Section 5:

at 1:33 the phrase "partly on account of the pavement" is omitted.
at 1:59 the phrase "are those of small carts" is omitted.
at 14:31 the phrase "the arctic foxes leave their holes" is omitted.

Many thanks,

Philip

PhileasBlogg · Post by **PhileasBlogg** » February 6th, 2018, 4:46 pm

Thanks!

Corrections have been made to chapter 5: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/frostiana_05_davis_128kb.mp3
Duration is now 25:10

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 6th, 2018, 5:24 pm

Congratulations, Lewis!

Your first solo for Librivox is complete!! (A fancy way of saying Section 5 is PL-OK.)

Thank you for the privilege of listening to your reading.

Phil, as always, a joy to work with you.

See you on the boards,

Philip

Post by **philchenevert** » February 6th, 2018, 7:48 pm

This frosty project is now in our catalog at https://librivox.org/frostiana-or-a-history-of-the-river-thames-in-a-frozen-state-by-george-davis/

A very big congrats to the first time soloist for doing such a bang up great job!! and of course thanks to Philip our intrepid DPL.