COMPLETE [DRAM.READ] The Betrothed by Manzoni - kd

benderca · Post by **benderca** » January 19th, 2018, 10:12 am

carteki wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 9:56 am Please find the completed ch21 here. Time 26m22
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_manzoni_128kb.mp3
I haven't edited the old woman too much, but there are extremely long gaps between her phrases. Please could you shorten them a little in the next chapters.
Thanks.

Do you mean gaps in between my entire lines (or gaps between sentences that go together)? I left exact 3 seconds when the narrator or someone else speaks, as is typically requested for dramatic readings. Do you want me to do it differently? Wouldn't that make it harder to edit?

benderca · Post by **benderca** » January 19th, 2018, 10:59 am

benderca wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 10:12 am
carteki wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 9:56 am Please find the completed ch21 here. Time 26m22
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_manzoni_128kb.mp3
I haven't edited the old woman too much, but there are extremely long gaps between her phrases. Please could you shorten them a little in the next chapters.
Thanks.
Do you mean gaps in between my entire lines (or gaps between sentences that go together)? I left exact 3 seconds when the narrator or someone else speaks, as is typically requested for dramatic readings. Do you want me to do it differently? Wouldn't that make it harder to edit?

Here's Chapter 22 (only 2 lines):
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_22_oldwoman2_1.flac

and Chapter 24:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_24_oldwoman2_1.flac

carteki · Post by **carteki** » January 22nd, 2018, 8:23 am

Thanks Bendrica.
Does anybody know when Mary will do the narrator pick-ups? It will be useful to edit the files once.
Thanks
Kim

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » January 22nd, 2018, 8:25 am

carteki wrote: ↑January 22nd, 2018, 8:23 am Thanks Bendrica.
Does anybody know when Mary will do the narrator pick-ups? It will be useful to edit the files once.
Thanks
Kim

I have not heard from her. Indeed, she has not even picked up my PM. I will try contacting her again.

eta: I actually have her email way back from 2014. I will try that method of communication.

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » January 22nd, 2018, 8:29 am

benderca wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 10:59 am
benderca wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 10:12 am
carteki wrote: ↑January 19th, 2018, 9:56 am Please find the completed ch21 here. Time 26m22
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_manzoni_128kb.mp3
I haven't edited the old woman too much, but there are extremely long gaps between her phrases. Please could you shorten them a little in the next chapters.
Thanks.
Do you mean gaps in between my entire lines (or gaps between sentences that go together)? I left exact 3 seconds when the narrator or someone else speaks, as is typically requested for dramatic readings. Do you want me to do it differently? Wouldn't that make it harder to edit?

Here's Chapter 22 (only 2 lines):
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_22_oldwoman2_1.flac

and Chapter 24:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_24_oldwoman2_1.flac

In the MW - thanks so much!!!

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » January 25th, 2018, 7:32 pm

Mary's missing lines: https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_narrator_missinglines.flac

BlueFunk · Post by **BlueFunk** » February 4th, 2018, 7:38 am

Please find missing line for The Unknown

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_unknown.mp3

All the best,

Blue Lizard

carteki · Post by **carteki** » February 9th, 2018, 1:46 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_manzoni_128kb.mp3 - 26m27
Final version uploaded. Ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_24_manzoni_128kb.mp3 - 44m10
Ch 24 done. Please let me know if there are other edits that I need to do to finish my part of this project.
Kim

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » February 9th, 2018, 5:48 am

carteki wrote: ↑February 9th, 2018, 1:46 am https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_21_manzoni_128kb.mp3 - 26m27
Final version uploaded. Ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/betrothed_24_manzoni_128kb.mp3 - 44m10
Ch 24 done. Please let me know if there are other edits that I need to do to finish my part of this project.
Kim

Thanks, Kim! I will keep you posted.

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » February 12th, 2018, 6:04 am

Old Woman, Notary and Chapter XXI are PL OK!

Now on to XXIV!

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » February 12th, 2018, 6:05 am

MrsHand wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 6:04 am Old Woman, Notary and Chapter XXI are PL OK!

Now on to XXIV!

Thank you!

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » February 12th, 2018, 6:53 am

Chapter XXIV PL Notes:

Missing Narrator line at 03:52 "Lucy raised her head, looked at the Unknown, and beholding his humble and downcast expression, she was affected with a mingled feeling of gratitude and pity:"

carteki · Post by **carteki** » February 12th, 2018, 3:07 pm

MrsHand wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 6:53 am Chapter XXIV PL Notes:

Missing Narrator line at 03:52 "Lucy raised her head, looked at the Unknown, and beholding his humble and downcast expression, she was affected with a mingled feeling of gratitude and pity:"

Assuming xxiv means 24?
Kim

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » February 12th, 2018, 4:29 pm

carteki wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 3:07 pm
MrsHand wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 6:53 am Chapter XXIV PL Notes:

Missing Narrator line at 03:52 "Lucy raised her head, looked at the Unknown, and beholding his humble and downcast expression, she was affected with a mingled feeling of gratitude and pity:"
Assuming xxiv means 24?
Kim

Yes, sorry.

WoollyBee · Post by **WoollyBee** » February 13th, 2018, 8:20 am

MrsHand wrote: ↑February 12th, 2018, 6:53 am Chapter XXIV PL Notes:

Missing Narrator line at 03:52 "Lucy raised her head, looked at the Unknown, and beholding his humble and downcast expression, she was affected with a mingled feeling of gratitude and pity:"

Do we have this in the narrator file for 24 or do I need to have her record it?