COMPLETE [fiction] Elsie Venner by Oliver Wendell Holmes -ck
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Sections 26, 27, and 28 are all PL OK.
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
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Section 29 is PL OK, but it has a lot of pops and crackles (like what happened to chapter 6). Carolin and Deon, I'll leave this up to you if you want to mark it PL OK or not. Other than that though, the reading is good and there are no other tech issues.
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
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In Section 30 there is a skip/jump at 18:29 on the words "within its buttressed ribs."
Sections 31, 32, and 36 are all PL OK!
Melissa
Sections 31, 32, and 36 are all PL OK!
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?