COMPLETE[Plays] One Act Play Collection 010 - thw

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » December 17th, 2017, 8:08 pm

PL notes for Household Gods. Because this play is in verse, I have used the PL standards for poetry in listening to the lines.

Section 43 Adela is PL-OK.

Section 46 Faun is PL-OK.

Section 45 Pan--I have the following notes.

At 0:11 I heard "Scream Screaming": I expected "Scream Scream"
At 0:46 I heard "My eyes": I expected "Mine eyes"
At 0:53 I heard "But furrier": I expected "But fierer [fire-i-er or fiery-er]"

Nice job, everyone!

Many thanks,

Philip

ZamesCurran · Post by **ZamesCurran** » December 25th, 2017, 2:08 am

I rerecord all three lines (although the first one sound like "scream scream" to me on the original...)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/Hou ... rowley.mp3

ZamesCurran · Post by **ZamesCurran** » December 25th, 2017, 2:19 am

fixed narrator:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cat ... _yeats.mp3

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » December 25th, 2017, 11:09 pm

Zames:

Both the narrator and Pan are Spot PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip

EstherbenSimonides · December 27th, 2017, 10:26 am

I'm planning on editing the Abraham story next!

ShiNeko · Post by **ShiNeko** » December 28th, 2017, 11:34 am

ZamesCurran wrote:fixed narrator:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cat ... _yeats.mp3

Section 26 Narrator PL OK

EstherbenSimonides · December 28th, 2017, 8:40 pm

Here is the edited Proving of Abraham:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/one ... benton.mp3
7:13
Thanks!

Post by **dlolso21** » December 29th, 2017, 3:52 am

DrPGould wrote:Pl notes for "The People," by Susan Glaspell

Section 10 Earnest Approach PL-OK!
Section 11 Light Touch PL-OK!

Section 14 Man from the Cape at -:14 The line beginning "My oyster bed" and ending "I read what you wrote" on p. 11 of the script is missing. Other than that, the reading is perfect.

Many thanks to all,

Philip

Section 14 Man from the Cape at -:14

missing line inserted
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/the ... _128kb.mp3

David O

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » December 29th, 2017, 9:58 am

David:

The Man from the Cape is Spot-PL OK!

Many thanks,

Philip

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » December 29th, 2017, 2:32 pm

Hello, David.

Here is Isabel's role:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3

Time is 3:43

I'm looking forward to your constructive feedback. I would be happy to fix anything.

Post by **dlolso21** » December 29th, 2017, 7:02 pm

Sara,

Thank you, this was great fun to listen to!!

There was one of you line's missing.

Isabel. An engine down on the railroad crossing?

And could you please laugh and giggle a bit. There are two lines where the girls laugh together: (All laugh and giggle.) and (All laugh and have a good time as Isabel ...)

I could just read them as narrator, but I think it would sound much better to have a mix of voices laughing. Here is a link the partial laughter mix I have so far.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... iggles.mp3

David O

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » December 30th, 2017, 12:58 am

dlolso21 wrote:Sara,

Thank you, this was great fun to listen to!!

There was one of you line's missing.

Isabel. An engine down on the railroad crossing?

And could you please laugh and giggle a bit. There are two lines where the girls laugh together: (All laugh and giggle.) and (All laugh and have a good time as Isabel ...)

I could just read them as narrator, but I think it would sound much better to have a mix of voices laughing. Here is a link the partial laughter mix I have so far.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... iggles.mp3

David O

You're welcome, David! And thanks for the feedback.

I'll correct my file in the evening (it's morning now with a loud background noise).

SaraHale · Post by **SaraHale** » December 30th, 2017, 12:07 pm

Hello again.

Here's my corrected file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3

Time is 3:54

0:29 > the missing line
1:37 and 2:42 > the missing laugh.

I hope it's okay now, if not. I'd be happy to fix it again.

Happy New Year!

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » December 30th, 2017, 7:51 pm

Hello All
Just to let you all know that whilst I am kept away from here with family matters

DrPGould(Philip) is going to be keeping an eye on the thread. I am not disappearing completely but given that I may not be on here everyday as I normally am it is to make sure that nothing gets left for too long before being dealt with.

Thank you to everyone who has helped to make this difficult time easier knowing I am not letting people down on here.

Post by **ToddHW** » December 31st, 2017, 3:07 am

wib66 wrote:Hello All
Just to let you all know that whilst I am kept away from here with family matters

DrPGould(Philip) is going to be keeping an eye on the thread. I am not disappearing completely but given that I may not be on here everyday as I normally am it is to make sure that nothing gets left for too long before being dealt with.

Thank you to everyone who has helped to make this difficult time easier knowing I am not letting people down on here.

Philip,

I have given you access to the MW. Thank you for your help here.

Thanks, Todd