COMPLETE[Plays] One Act Play Collection 010 - thw
PL notes for Household Gods. Because this play is in verse, I have used the PL standards for poetry in listening to the lines.
Section 43 Adela is PL-OK.
Section 46 Faun is PL-OK.
Section 45 Pan--I have the following notes.
At 0:11 I heard "Scream Screaming": I expected "Scream Scream"
At 0:46 I heard "My eyes": I expected "Mine eyes"
At 0:53 I heard "But furrier": I expected "But fierer [fire-i-er or fiery-er]"
Nice job, everyone!
Many thanks,
Philip
Section 43 Adela is PL-OK.
Section 46 Faun is PL-OK.
Section 45 Pan--I have the following notes.
At 0:11 I heard "Scream Screaming": I expected "Scream Scream"
At 0:46 I heard "My eyes": I expected "Mine eyes"
At 0:53 I heard "But furrier": I expected "But fierer [fire-i-er or fiery-er]"
Nice job, everyone!
Many thanks,
Philip
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I rerecord all three lines (although the first one sound like "scream scream" to me on the original...)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/Hou ... rowley.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/Hou ... rowley.mp3
Truth,
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I'm planning on editing the Abraham story next!
Ad Majorem Dei Gloriam,
Esther ben Simonides
Esther ben Simonides
Section 26 Narrator PL OKZamesCurran wrote:fixed narrator:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cat ... _yeats.mp3
~Anastasiia
Multilingual Monthly Poem like Weekly Poetry but for all languages🗺
Сборник рассказов Л. Андреева
"Кобзар" Шевченко several short roles: "Гайдамаки", "Великий льох"
Multilingual Monthly Poem like Weekly Poetry but for all languages🗺
Сборник рассказов Л. Андреева
"Кобзар" Шевченко several short roles: "Гайдамаки", "Великий льох"
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Here is the edited Proving of Abraham:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/one ... benton.mp3
7:13
Thanks!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/one ... benton.mp3
7:13
Thanks!
Ad Majorem Dei Gloriam,
Esther ben Simonides
Esther ben Simonides
Section 14 Man from the Cape at -:14DrPGould wrote:Pl notes for "The People," by Susan Glaspell
Section 10 Earnest Approach PL-OK!
Section 11 Light Touch PL-OK!
Section 14 Man from the Cape at -:14 The line beginning "My oyster bed" and ending "I read what you wrote" on p. 11 of the script is missing. Other than that, the reading is perfect.
Many thanks to all,
Philip
missing line inserted
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/the ... _128kb.mp3
David O
Hello, David.
Here is Isabel's role:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3
Time is 3:43
I'm looking forward to your constructive feedback. I would be happy to fix anything.
Here is Isabel's role:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3
Time is 3:43
I'm looking forward to your constructive feedback. I would be happy to fix anything.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Sara,
Thank you, this was great fun to listen to!!
There was one of you line's missing.
Isabel. An engine down on the railroad crossing?
And could you please laugh and giggle a bit. There are two lines where the girls laugh together: (All laugh and giggle.) and (All laugh and have a good time as Isabel ...)
I could just read them as narrator, but I think it would sound much better to have a mix of voices laughing. Here is a link the partial laughter mix I have so far.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... iggles.mp3
David O
Thank you, this was great fun to listen to!!
There was one of you line's missing.
Isabel. An engine down on the railroad crossing?
And could you please laugh and giggle a bit. There are two lines where the girls laugh together: (All laugh and giggle.) and (All laugh and have a good time as Isabel ...)
I could just read them as narrator, but I think it would sound much better to have a mix of voices laughing. Here is a link the partial laughter mix I have so far.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... iggles.mp3
David O
You're welcome, David! And thanks for the feedback. I'll correct my file in the evening (it's morning now with a loud background noise).dlolso21 wrote:Sara,
Thank you, this was great fun to listen to!!
There was one of you line's missing.
Isabel. An engine down on the railroad crossing?
And could you please laugh and giggle a bit. There are two lines where the girls laugh together: (All laugh and giggle.) and (All laugh and have a good time as Isabel ...)
I could just read them as narrator, but I think it would sound much better to have a mix of voices laughing. Here is a link the partial laughter mix I have so far.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... iggles.mp3
David O
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hello again.
Here's my corrected file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3
Time is 3:54
0:29 > the missing line
1:37 and 2:42 > the missing laugh.
I hope it's okay now, if not. I'd be happy to fix it again.
Happy New Year!
Here's my corrected file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jer ... donald.mp3
Time is 3:54
0:29 > the missing line
1:37 and 2:42 > the missing laugh.
I hope it's okay now, if not. I'd be happy to fix it again.
Happy New Year!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hello All
Just to let you all know that whilst I am kept away from here with family matters
DrPGould(Philip) is going to be keeping an eye on the thread. I am not disappearing completely but given that I may not be on here everyday as I normally am it is to make sure that nothing gets left for too long before being dealt with.
Thank you to everyone who has helped to make this difficult time easier knowing I am not letting people down on here.
Just to let you all know that whilst I am kept away from here with family matters
DrPGould(Philip) is going to be keeping an eye on the thread. I am not disappearing completely but given that I may not be on here everyday as I normally am it is to make sure that nothing gets left for too long before being dealt with.
Thank you to everyone who has helped to make this difficult time easier knowing I am not letting people down on here.
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Philip,wib66 wrote:Hello All
Just to let you all know that whilst I am kept away from here with family matters
DrPGould(Philip) is going to be keeping an eye on the thread. I am not disappearing completely but given that I may not be on here everyday as I normally am it is to make sure that nothing gets left for too long before being dealt with.
Thank you to everyone who has helped to make this difficult time easier knowing I am not letting people down on here.
I have given you access to the MW. Thank you for your help here.
Thanks, Todd