COMPLETE Little Men by Louisa May Alcott-mas

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » November 28th, 2017, 5:50 pm

Elizabby wrote:Twinkle, while I'm at it do you want me to put all the reader names into the finished sections? I can do that, and let you concentrate on editing!

Sure, if you have a chance. Thank you!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » November 29th, 2017, 4:47 am

MW updated - four chapters left to edit, one each for our four editors!

MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » December 4th, 2017, 11:46 am

Here is the edited Chapter 10, 34:45

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlemen_10_alcott_128kb.mp3

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » December 4th, 2017, 2:54 pm

Ah, thank you!! (Another long one!!)

I need to get busy editing, too...

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 4th, 2017, 8:57 pm

Chapter 20 is PL OK!

Lovely work!

(MW updated - only three chapters to go!)

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » December 8th, 2017, 8:29 pm

Chapter 19 checking in:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspi ... _128kb.mp3 (28:06)

fiddlesticks · Post by **fiddlesticks** » December 8th, 2017, 8:42 pm

I plan on editing mine tomorrow

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » December 8th, 2017, 8:45 pm

Thanks for the update!

fiddlesticks · Post by **fiddlesticks** » December 9th, 2017, 2:37 pm

Here is chapter 11!!

Time: 29:22

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspi ... _128kb.mp3

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » December 10th, 2017, 10:31 am

Awesome!! Thanks, Tiffany!!

Only one chapter left to edit!

I think I'll PM Adele and let her know.

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » December 10th, 2017, 10:40 am

I think I'll keep the DP the way it is, so it's PL OK.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 10th, 2017, 7:41 pm

Chapter 11 just has one editing error, but is otherwise great!

18:16-28 a repeat of Mr Laurie's speech is inserted between Daisy's line and the narrator. The speech is correctly in place where it belongs, so this repeat can simply be cut.

fiddlesticks · Post by **fiddlesticks** » December 10th, 2017, 8:01 pm

Nice easy fix, I will edit and reupload tomorrow

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 11th, 2017, 12:37 am

Chapter 19 - there's just one question really, and maybe a BC decision required?

Starting at 12:48 there is the letter from Meg, which is addressed to and read by Fritz. In the script it is colour coded for Meg, but in this version the Fritz version of the speech is included. The Meg version was also recorded, so both are available.

Was this changed at some point? If I were the BC I would usually have a letter read by the writer, but I'm only the DPL in this project so it's really Twinkle's decision.

AdeledePignerolles · December 11th, 2017, 7:36 am

That chapter is my plan for today! This has gotten finished up quickly!!