COMPLETE [poetry] Songs Before Sunrise by A. C. Swinburne -ck

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Mattaghetti wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3

This is chapter 6! Clocks in at 14:12. I checked it it should be good to go, but feel free to double check me! :D

It is really well done, but at about 10:23 there is a noticeable drop in volume. I selected from 10:23 to the end of the section and went to EFFECT>AMPLIFY and amplified it by +3 and it was about the same volume as the beginning. This problem happens to me after I take a short break from recording, only mine is usually much louder as I have rested and have more energy. :oops:

once the volume difference is fixed, it is good to go!

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aniroo wrote:
Mattaghetti wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3

This is chapter 6! Clocks in at 14:12. I checked it it should be good to go, but feel free to double check me! :D

It is really well done, but at about 10:23 there is a noticeable drop in volume. I selected from 10:23 to the end of the section and went to EFFECT>AMPLIFY and amplified it by +3 and it was about the same volume as the beginning. This problem happens to me after I take a short break from recording, only mine is usually much louder as I have rested and have more energy. :oops:

once the volume difference is fixed, it is good to go!

thanks,
aniroo

Here is the updated one! Should be good to go now then!

I appreciate your listening :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3
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Thank you both :thumbs:
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Section 6 PL OK :thumbs:

Thanks

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Thank you :thumbs:
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Minor problem with 29 On The Downs: I think there's a typo in the original text.

At the top of p. 195 the first line has "health" where I think "heath" is clearly intended:

"Out of pale cliff and sunburnt health,
Out of the low sea curled beneath
In the land’s bending arm embayed,"

The second line seems to demand a rhyme with "beneath", and if that weren't enough, the whole verse seems to me to be meant to echo the second verse of the poem:

"And on the lip’s edge of the down,
Here where the bent-grass burns to brown
In the dry sea-wind, and the heath
Crawls to the cliff-side and looks down,
I watch, and hear beneath
The low tide breathe."

Other online texts have "health", though I think it makes no sense in this context: I have found one online book about Swinburne that quotes it as "heath".

Should I go with my instinct or stick to the printed text we're all using?
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Clocking at 4:15, its section 7!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/on ... _128kb.mp3

Again, ran through checker and proof listened so should be pretty ok!
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Thank you both :thumbs:

Patrick, go for heath. It must be a misprint :) thank you!
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Thank you :thumbs:
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Mattaghetti wrote:Clocking at 4:15, its section 7!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/on ... _128kb.mp3

Again, ran through checker and proof listened so should be pretty ok!


Section 7 PL OK :clap: Nicely done.

I noticed that the file name was missing the "S" in songsbeforesunrise, it reads
"ongsbeforesunrise" :D It'll be OK though, no need to re-upload. You'll probably be double checking all your next files :D :P
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PatrickLondon wrote:Here's 29:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/so ... _128kb.mp3

Duration 7:25
PL OK

very lovely, listen, thanks. :clap: :thumbs:

Ps. good call on the heath/health
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Thank you :thumbs:
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Hi,

Please can I have 27?

Thanks,

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Of course, thank you!
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