Carolin wrote:Thank you jude
I haven't forgotten my poem just to say.... it's just I've had a stomach bug over the weekend..... so I will be doing it this week at some point.....
I see you haven't found a DPL yet, so I gave this one a listen. And I don't regret doing itbusbyhr wrote:Here's the link to my reading of The Merman. Any kind of feedback, good or bad, will be greatly appreciated.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsoftheseaandlaysoftheland_14_leland_128kb_3.mp3
how can I resist listening to another Jude-performance a pirate song is perfect for your way of reading. Very entertaining from the first line to the last.Jude1972 wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsoftheseaandlaysoftheland_17_leland_128kb.mp3 (03:09)
here's my next one
I hope you don't mean doing the WHOLE poem again !! Please don't, because the rest is totally fine. If you want to correct the two errors, only do those two sentences. Really, it's not worth the entire work doing it once again. Not to mention, you may do another error on the second goJude1972 wrote:Hi Sonia, I will do it again tomorrow night!! I'm at work tomorrow ten till half four, so will do it again in my evening! I didn't print the poem big enough so hence the mistakes!!!! i'm printing it bigger now!
Kitty wrote:I hope you don't mean doing the WHOLE poem again !! Please don't, because the rest is totally fine. If you want to correct the two errors, only do those two sentences. Really, it's not worth the entire work doing it once again. Not to mention, you may do another error on the second goJude1972 wrote:Hi Sonia, I will do it again tomorrow night!! I'm at work tomorrow ten till half four, so will do it again in my evening! I didn't print the poem big enough so hence the mistakes!!!! i'm printing it bigger now!
Sonia
seriuosly? You are making yourself too much work if you always re-do the entire poem just for one error.Jude1972 wrote:I've never tried correcting just a sentence before! How do I do it??? I'll do it early evening......