Section 12 and 13 need one more sentence. I didn't hear it in #13 and then I went back to see if I missed it in the others. #11 is good but I missed it in #12. The sentence you need to add after "end of poem" is " this recording is in the public domain." I'm pretty sure it has to be on every recording. Sorry I missed it the first time.
That was the tech stuff. #13 was beautiful, inspirational really.

aniroo