COMPLETE [poetry] The White Sail by Louise Imogen Guiney -ck

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 25th, 2017, 10:36 pm

Fixed, thank you!

MillionMoments · Post by **MillionMoments** » October 11th, 2017, 10:52 am

Section 14, 2 minutes and 15 seconds:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_14_guiney.mp3

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 11th, 2017, 10:57 am

thank you

MillionMoments · Post by **MillionMoments** » October 11th, 2017, 11:03 am

And section 22, 1 minute 30:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_22_guiney.mp3

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 11th, 2017, 10:47 pm

Thank you

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » October 12th, 2017, 9:04 am

silverquill wrote:I'd like to take on The White Sail, section 1, and also 16,17 if I may.

Carolin,

Since Section One, "The White Sail," is over 3,500 words, would you like the regular long LV disclaimer? I'll do whatever you deem best.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 12th, 2017, 12:24 pm

Thanks for asking, larry

we will stick to the short disclaimer though, as this is a poem. I only start poetry projects with the long disclaimer when the first section is not a poem. Thank you!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » October 13th, 2017, 10:45 pm

Here are the two shorter poems. I have The White Sail ready to edit.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_17_guiney_128kb.mp3 2:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_18_guiney_128kb.mp3 0:58

brucek · Post by **brucek** » October 14th, 2017, 7:58 am

I would like to claim sections 35, 36, 37, 38, 39 and 40.

Thanks,
Bruce.

xios01 · Post by **xios01** » October 14th, 2017, 8:33 am

I would like to claim Section #2 "Tarpeia"

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 15th, 2017, 4:47 am

Thank you all

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » October 15th, 2017, 10:04 pm

The White Sail

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/whitesail_01_guiney_128kb.mp3 29:06

More challenging than I had thought. The line structure of the poems made the phrasing difficult, so it seems a bit choppy to me, but I hope isn't too far off.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 16th, 2017, 12:53 am

thank you larry!

im sure it will be wonderful

xios01 · Post by **xios01** » October 17th, 2017, 2:59 pm

Completed Section #2 Tarpeia

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/the_white_sail_02_guiney_128kb.mp3 04m18s

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 17th, 2017, 10:46 pm

Thank you