COMPLETE [poetry] The Mother's Dream by Hannah F Gould -ck

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » October 17th, 2017, 6:35 am

Section 92 is great except for the silence at the end. It is almost 10 seconds. Please cut 5 secs. Thanks.

aniroo

ScottKelley · Post by **ScottKelley** » October 17th, 2017, 7:04 am

aniroo wrote:Section 92 is great except for the silence at the end. It is almost 10 seconds. Please cut 5 secs. Thanks.

aniroo

ScottKelley · Post by **ScottKelley** » October 17th, 2017, 7:09 am

Four more-

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 17th, 2017, 8:44 am

thank you both

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » October 19th, 2017, 6:57 am

Sections 78,79,81,82 PL OK

Gould really showed a different side of herself with that NUN poem......nicely read , again.

thanks
aniroo

ScottKelley · Post by **ScottKelley** » October 19th, 2017, 11:09 am

aniroo wrote:Sections 78,79,81,82 PL OK

Gould really showed a different side of herself with that NUN poem......nicely read , again.

thanks
aniroo

Agreed, Nun was wonderfully written and a pleasure to read. Thanks for the nice words about my reading as well!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 20th, 2017, 1:14 am

thank you

aniroo · Post by **aniroo** » October 20th, 2017, 12:21 pm

Section 92 PL OK

Thanks.

aniroo

VictoriAsztaller · October 21st, 2017, 12:56 pm

Hey Carolin!
You get mine next week.. sorry...

all my love Victoria

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 21st, 2017, 10:56 pm

Thank you both

ScottKelley · Post by **ScottKelley** » October 22nd, 2017, 2:15 pm

Couple more.

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 22nd, 2017, 2:25 pm

Thank you

ScottKelley · Post by **ScottKelley** » October 23rd, 2017, 4:16 pm

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 24th, 2017, 12:15 am

thank you scott!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » October 24th, 2017, 12:18 am

we have orphans!