[COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
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I think 'fainting into utter unconsciousness' could be a useful life skill.
Chapter 13: At 10:45 it says, "You DID mean Mr. Carlton by the letter S." You said DIDN'T.
Other than that, everything was perfect.
Chapter 13: At 10:45 it says, "You DID mean Mr. Carlton by the letter S." You said DIDN'T.
Other than that, everything was perfect.
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
Ah yes, 'fainting into utter unconsciousness' indeed. I like the concept. I wonder how I might learn to do that?
Marvelous and an all-important catch you made in this dialog. Thank you!!
Chapter 13 has been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL.
Thanks so much!!
Marvelous and an all-important catch you made in this dialog. Thank you!!
Chapter 13 has been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL.
Thanks so much!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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Chapter 13 is PL OK!
Chapter 14: At 11:40 the text says, "...but of course you're FEARFULLY upset." You said PERFECTLY.
That was all I could find. Everything else was perfect!
Chapter 14: At 11:40 the text says, "...but of course you're FEARFULLY upset." You said PERFECTLY.
That was all I could find. Everything else was perfect!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Chapter 14 is PL OK!
I do the same thing whether I'm reading or not reading. It would be interesting to have a proof-listener following me around all day to tell me when I say one thing but really mean something else!
I do the same thing whether I'm reading or not reading. It would be interesting to have a proof-listener following me around all day to tell me when I say one thing but really mean something else!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
Exactly! Matter of fact, I kind of like the idea of having a personal proof-listener. What an excellent idea! If only ....
Well, at any rate, chapter 15 has been posted, although I'm not too fond of how the reading came out.
Thanks!!
Well, at any rate, chapter 15 has been posted, although I'm not too fond of how the reading came out.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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I thought your reading of both chapters was excellent, as always!
So, I had to google "cachou," which apparently was sort of like an ancient Tic-Tac.
OK, here we go.
Chapter 15
At 6:07, the text says, "The time was too short for anything except a definitely PREMEDITATED act." You said "PREDETERMINED."
At 7:90, the text says, "...and might Mrs. Markam's suggestion have EVEN a foundation of probability." You said, "BEEN."
Chapter 16
At 2:41 the text says, "...for he foresaw that his story would be BUT brief." You said "CUT."
At 11:40 the text says, "...and DETAINING Harris." You said, "DETAILING."
That's it!
So, I had to google "cachou," which apparently was sort of like an ancient Tic-Tac.
OK, here we go.
Chapter 15
At 6:07, the text says, "The time was too short for anything except a definitely PREMEDITATED act." You said "PREDETERMINED."
At 7:90, the text says, "...and might Mrs. Markam's suggestion have EVEN a foundation of probability." You said, "BEEN."
Chapter 16
At 2:41 the text says, "...for he foresaw that his story would be BUT brief." You said "CUT."
At 11:40 the text says, "...and DETAINING Harris." You said, "DETAILING."
That's it!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
Good catches on both chapters!
I didn't know what a cachou was either. At first I figured it was a variant spelling of "cashew", which I suppose is natural, but I also had to look it up, as you did.
I know that around the 1950's and 60's, Sen-Sen was a common product for suppressing tobacco breath. (Yes, I'm guilty) Live and learn.
15 and 16 have both been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL at your convenience.
Thanks!!
I didn't know what a cachou was either. At first I figured it was a variant spelling of "cashew", which I suppose is natural, but I also had to look it up, as you did.
I know that around the 1950's and 60's, Sen-Sen was a common product for suppressing tobacco breath. (Yes, I'm guilty) Live and learn.
15 and 16 have both been patched and re-uploaded, ready for a spot PL at your convenience.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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Perfect fixes!
Chapters 15 and 16 are PL OK!
Chapters 15 and 16 are PL OK!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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There's always some French minx who's everlastingly spying about in the hallways. So annoying.
Just one small mistake in Chapter 17:
At 11:33, the text reads: "...it had been bits of romantic music that Rob felt sure had been for Schuyler's DELECTATION more than his mother's." You said DECLARATION.
That's the only thing I could find!
Just one small mistake in Chapter 17:
At 11:33, the text reads: "...it had been bits of romantic music that Rob felt sure had been for Schuyler's DELECTATION more than his mother's." You said DECLARATION.
That's the only thing I could find!
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
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Perfect fix.
Chapter 17 is PL OK.
I agree wholeheartedly with Burt of Burt's Bees.
Chapter 17 is PL OK.
I agree wholeheartedly with Burt of Burt's Bees.
Holly
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman
"I'll tell you right out, I'm a man who likes talking to a man who likes to talk." ~Kasper Gutman