ah, a new chapter is ready.
Well done Tom, although this part was hard to swallow, Adam's tirade is so full of sexism
I never remembered it was that awful !
I did not find many errors, all in all it was perfectly narrated. Here only a few notes:
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at 0:01,
0:18 and
42:40: "Livre
Dix" - you say "di", but the number especially when it stands alone is pronounced "
diss"
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at 3:18: "ces furies dévas
tatrices": you say "dévas-trices" instead of "dévas-
ta-trices"
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at 6:40: "quelles seraient celles d'entre
elles": you say "
eux"
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at 11:37: "tout
ce que je mange, ou bois" - you forgot "
ce"
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at 20:37: "tout le blâme dûment retom
bé": I see what you mean in your note and you don't have to correct it, but I just wanted to note that "retombé" is not grammatically wrong in this sentence as it has more of an adjectival function here, or a past tense, without mentioning the verb "être", which is ok. But if yours is closer to the original, it's probably ok to leave it as well. There's not much of a difference in nuance anyway and it could well be a typo.
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at 34:56: "choisissons
le plus court" - I hear "
la"
that's all
We're almost at the end !!!! 3 more sections. Or do you think section 12 will be divided in two parts again ?
Sonia