OK -- thanks. Re'do's have been uploaded. Hope these work better.Newgatenovelist wrote:
25 - Prejudice
0.34-0.37, third line of second stanza:
My strength and time [heard time and strength] were limited;
27 - The Engineer's Story
0.24-0.31, fourth line of first stanza:
The terrible fright of that hell-tinctured night
Is the cause of my head [heard head's] bein' bald.
For what it's worth I prefer your version, but as this is word-perfect I've flagged it.