[COMPLETE]Wheels - The Third Cycle by various - dlo

Newgatenovelist · September 10th, 2017, 2:05 am

bluechien wrote:2 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_10_various_128kb.mp3 1:55
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_08_various_128kb.mp3 1:28

edit: one extra:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_17_various_128kb.mp3 3:03

Hi Eva!

10 is PL OK.

One note for 8, Fatigue:

1.02-1.05. Last paragraph, second line:
I became [heard become] aware that his curling pug's tail...

Newgatenovelist · September 10th, 2017, 2:10 am

NemoR wrote:In the intro for section 1, I read each of the readers names.

To make sure I don't mispronounce them, I have a question about Cate's name:

Is it pronounced like "Kathy", or like "Kate"?

Thanks!

Nemo

Hi Nemo,

Cate is and rhymes with great! You can hear the good lady herself pronouncing her name in the first twenty seconds of this file:
http://ia600204.us.archive.org/28/items/moral_tales_1602_librivox/moral_tales_00_guizot_128kb.mp3

Happy recording!

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » September 10th, 2017, 7:56 am

Newgatenovelist wrote:
Hi Nemo,

Cate is and rhymes with great! You can hear the good lady herself pronouncing her name in the first twenty seconds of this file:
http://ia600204.us.archive.org/28/items/moral_tales_1602_librivox/moral_tales_00_guizot_128kb.mp3

Happy recording!

Thanks Erin!

I had listened to a couple of her previous recordings because I wanted to make sure I got her last name correct and in those her first name was read as Cathy, so I wanted to make sure.

I'll have a few for your PL expertise in a little bit!

Nemo

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » September 10th, 2017, 8:11 am

Section 1 - 3 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_01_various_128kb.mp3 (2:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_02_various_128kb.mp3 (3:06)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_03_various_128kb.mp3 (2:24)

Nemo

Newgatenovelist · September 10th, 2017, 8:34 am

bluechien wrote: edit: one extra:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_17_various_128kb.mp3 3:03

A short note for 17, Two Fragments from the Spanish:

At 0.13, please add 'I' at the beginning of the first fragment

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » September 10th, 2017, 10:12 pm

Sections 4-6 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_04_various_128kb.mp3 (1:19)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_05_various_128kb.mp3 (2:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_06_various_128kb.mp3 (2:05)

Nemo

bluechien · Post by **bluechien** » September 10th, 2017, 11:07 pm

Thanks, Erin - I will post corrections in a batch a bit later on, with your notes.

In the meantime, more for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_47_various_128kb.mp3 2:34
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_46_various_128kb.mp3 0:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_45_various_128kb.mp3 1:41
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_44_various_128kb.mp3 3:26
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_43_various_128kb.mp3 2:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_42_various_128kb.mp3 5:52

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » September 12th, 2017, 7:18 pm

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » September 14th, 2017, 3:38 pm

Sections 13-16 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_13_various_128kb.mp3 (1:31)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_14_various_128kb.mp3 (1:49)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_15_various_128kb.mp3 (1:57)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_16_various_128kb.mp3 (1:28)

Nemo

bluechien · Post by **bluechien** » September 15th, 2017, 11:37 am

#12 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_12_various_128kb.mp3 17:28

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » October 1st, 2017, 12:11 pm

NemoR wrote:Section 1 - 3 for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_01_various_128kb.mp3 (2:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_02_various_128kb.mp3 (3:06)
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_03_various_128kb.mp3 (2:24)

Nemo

I'm back at the desk and very glad to have more poetry in my life!

Sections 2, 3 and 4 are PL OK.

With section 1, London Squares, I've flagged one pronunciation. It's at 0.48-0.50, the third line of the first stanza:
Each tortuous line...

I'm hearing a second R in tortuous (like torture-ous). Could you please be honest and tell me if this is just me not picking up on a regional accent I'm not terribly familiar with?
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/tortuous
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/tortuous

Erin

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » October 1st, 2017, 3:40 pm

Newgatenovelist wrote:
I'm back at the desk and very glad to have more poetry in my life!

Sections 2, 3 and 4 are PL OK.

With section 1, London Squares, I've flagged one pronunciation. It's at 0.48-0.50, the third line of the first stanza:
Each tortuous line...

I'm hearing a second R in tortuous (like torture-ous). Could you please be honest and tell me if this is just me not picking up on a regional accent I'm not terribly familiar with?
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/tortuous
https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/tortuous

Erin

Hi Erin, glad you are back!

I could go either way on that one, so I recorded it again for a spot PL check. Let me know if this one is better.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_01_various_128kb.mp3

Nemo

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » October 2nd, 2017, 12:58 am

Cool! Sections 1 and 5 are PL OK. Osbert Sitwell is coming up with lots of surprises in this cycle.

One note for 6, Song of the Fauns, at 1.30-1.33, page 18:
Up to the sky
We cast these [heard thee] high

Erin

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » October 2nd, 2017, 2:49 am

bluechien wrote:Thanks, Erin - I will post corrections in a batch a bit later on, with your notes.

In the meantime, more for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_47_various_128kb.mp3 2:34
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_46_various_128kb.mp3 0:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_45_various_128kb.mp3 1:41
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_44_various_128kb.mp3 3:26
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_43_various_128kb.mp3 2:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/wheels3_42_various_128kb.mp3 5:52

Hi Eva,

42, 43 and 46 are PL OK!
Erin

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » October 2nd, 2017, 8:47 am

Hi Eva,

45 and 47 are PL OK.

I have one note for 44, Myself on the Merry-go-round:
0.30-0.33, p. 90:
Casts [heard cast] colours on the face of these

I think the S was articulated clearly with other words, which is why I marked this one (as articulation, not accent). Could you please listen?