COMPLETE [Romance] April's Lady by MW Hungerford -ck

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 13th, 2017, 11:11 pm

Thank you

MonikaR · Post by **MonikaR** » September 16th, 2017, 8:06 am

Here is chapter 33: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_33_hungerford_128kb.mp3 (17:29)

Could I also please take chapters 34 and 35?

Monika

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 16th, 2017, 1:17 pm

Hi Carolin -

Can I please sign up for Sections 27-31 inclusive?

Thanks!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 17th, 2017, 4:11 am

awesome, thank you both

Parrott22 · Post by **Parrott22** » September 17th, 2017, 11:47 am

Hi all,

Here's Chapter 13 for you (15:28):

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_13_hungerford_128kb.mp3

Hannah

mzmolly65 · Post by **mzmolly65** » September 17th, 2017, 12:32 pm

Chapters 12, 32 and 33 are all PL OK

mzmolly65 · Post by **mzmolly65** » September 17th, 2017, 2:38 pm

chapter 38 is PL OK

chapter 39; notes

3:27; *if there was a deeper meaning* repeats, missed edit

5:16; she shuts up WITH her fan with a little click, with is extra word

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 17th, 2017, 2:41 pm

Thanks for your feedback! I will get those changes made

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 17th, 2017, 4:17 pm

mzmolly65 wrote:chapter 38 is PL OK

chapter 39; notes

3:27; *if there was a deeper meaning* repeats, missed edit

5:16; she shuts up WITH her fan with a little click, with is extra word

Changes made to Chapter 39 - https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_39_hungerford_128kb.mp3 - 12:42

mzmolly65 · Post by **mzmolly65** » September 17th, 2017, 4:44 pm

Thanks Lynda

Chapter 39 is now PL OK

Sorry for more ..

Chapter 47
0:56
text reads, and on *waking*
I hear, and on walking

5:00
Text reads, should have *been* pursued
I hear, should have pursued

9:57
Text reads, meeting *her* with both hands outstretched
I hear, meeting him with both hands outstretched

18:02
Text reads; *his* over weening vanity
I hear; her over weening vanity

.. and only because they are so close together (if you’re fixing one you might want to fix both??)

In the next paragraph
Text reads; and *I* believe that will be soon
I hear; and believe that will be soon

18:56
Text reads, extreme anger, however, *fights* with her grief
I hear, extreme anger, however, fits with her grief

mzmolly65 · Post by **mzmolly65** » September 17th, 2017, 5:04 pm

chapter 48 is PL OK

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » September 17th, 2017, 5:12 pm

Hi Molly -

Here is Chapter 47 back with corrections - thanks so much for your feedback!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_47_hungerford_128kb.mp3 - 20:57

mzmolly65 · Post by **mzmolly65** » September 17th, 2017, 5:27 pm

Thanks Lynda .. all PL OK now!

Great job!

Great job so far, everyone!!!

Carolin · Post by **Carolin** » September 18th, 2017, 12:24 am

thank you all

jenimc · Post by **jenimc** » September 18th, 2017, 2:49 pm

Here's chapter 14 (10:03)

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_14_hungerford_128kb.mp3