Complete Concerning Isabel Carnaby by E. Thorneycro-ke

[Lmnei]

Miss Stav/Arlene -

Here are two more Chapters for you -

Section 21 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_21_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 35:40
Section 22 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_22_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 29:59

Have a great day!

[Lmnei]

Thanks, Linda! As we discussed in our PM conversation, there are two things you'd like to fix in Chapter 19:

At 7:59, "my dear" is repeated in the recording, but not in the written text
At 21:10, you read "Peter" and then corrected it to "Paul"

Hi Arlene - thanks for the feedback - these are both fixed now in Chapter 19 - here it is for you to check!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_19_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 28:18

[MaryAnnSpiegel]

Sorry for the delay, here is 0 - 12.26 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_00_fowler_128kb.mp3

MaryAnn

[miss stav]

How wonderful to see you all made such a great progress. I returned from a vacation and that was so great. I am here for real now. Thank you all.

[miss stav]

Linda, as Monika did not claim 11 and 12, they are all yours.

[MaryAnnSpiegel]

Here's 01 - 26.08 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_01_fowler_128kb.mp3

MaryAnn

[ArleneJoyce]

You guys have been busy!

The prologue, Chapter 19, and Chapter 14 are all PL OK. I hope to get all the others caught up by Sunday, as I will be away on business for most of a week.

[Lmnei]

Linda, as Monika did not claim 11 and 12, they are all yours.

Thanks Miss Stav! I will get to them in a bit... Working on Celistina right now.

[ArleneJoyce]

Hi, Linda.

Chapter 21 has 3 stumble/repeats that you probably meant to edit out:
- at 23:32 "and her eyes remained me", followed by "and her eyes reminded me"
- at 24:58 "who had no bewitching little valties" followed by "who had no bewitching little vanities"
- at 31:17 "and won't" followed by "and went"

and at 28:07, there are a couple words that are out of place and don't make sense in context (maybe from a previous or next line)? "said sometimes" instead of "comedies"

[ArleneJoyce]

A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.

[ArleneJoyce]

Chapter 1 is PL OK.

[Lmnei]

Hi Arlene -

Many thanks for the feedback - here is Section 21 back with the edits -

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_21_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 35:31

Have a good night!

[Lmnei]

A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.

Arlene - do you mean Chapter 22?

[Lmnei]

A couple of missed edits in Chapter 21 as well:

- at 13:54 " it is you who have molded my career" followed by "it is you who have molded my character"
- at 15:8 "you have such a very attractive nature" followed by "you have such a very affectionate nature"

I'm off on a business trip for a week. While I'll be able to keep up with what you're you're all doing, I won't be proof-listening any more sections until next Saturday. Hope you all have a wonderful week.

Arlene - do you mean Chapter 22?

It is okay Arlene - I found the edit at 15:8 - it was a little farther along which made me question whether it was Chapter 22 or not.

I have completed the edits on Chapter 22 now - thanks for the feedback!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/isabelcarnaby_22_fowler_128kb.mp3 - 29:51

[ArleneJoyce]

Yes, I apologize. It was chapter 22 and I was missing a digit in the time. Apparently, my mind was already on packing.