[COMPLETE]Popular History of Astronomy, Clerke-icequeen
Hi,
Section 19
Just a couple of notes. Not exactly sure how important they are, but mostly it's a case of using the wrong word. In some cases the substitute word is very close in meaning, in some it could change the meaning a little, but not much.
4:59 the word is Huggins's but I think I heard you say Hugginson. It was pretty quick.
6:02 " a red, a crimson, a yellow , a green OR deep blue." The OR should be an AND. I think it changes the meaning.
15:44 the word is "genera" the plural of genus, but you read genre. needs changed
27:15 you read "far below" but it is written far "beyond " not much difference here
28:16 one of "immediate" length should be "intermediate" length needs changed
aniroo
I'll try to get to section 20 tomorrow, unless someone else beats me to it.
Section 19
Just a couple of notes. Not exactly sure how important they are, but mostly it's a case of using the wrong word. In some cases the substitute word is very close in meaning, in some it could change the meaning a little, but not much.
4:59 the word is Huggins's but I think I heard you say Hugginson. It was pretty quick.
6:02 " a red, a crimson, a yellow , a green OR deep blue." The OR should be an AND. I think it changes the meaning.
15:44 the word is "genera" the plural of genus, but you read genre. needs changed
27:15 you read "far below" but it is written far "beyond " not much difference here
28:16 one of "immediate" length should be "intermediate" length needs changed
aniroo
I'll try to get to section 20 tomorrow, unless someone else beats me to it.
aniroo
Shasta wrote:If there are PL notes regarding the Section 41 I recently sent in I can't find them. Perhaps that notation is just a carry-over from the earlier mess. ??
I'm listening to section 41 right now, I will let you know if there is anything that needs to be fix in about an hour.
Ann
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aniroo wrote:Hi,
Section 19
Just a couple of notes. Not exactly sure how important they are, but mostly it's a case of using the wrong word. In some cases the substitute word is very close in meaning, in some it could change the meaning a little, but not much.
4:59 the word is Huggins's but I think I heard you say Hugginson. It was pretty quick.
6:02 " a red, a crimson, a yellow , a green OR deep blue." The OR should be an AND. I think it changes the meaning.
15:44 the word is "genera" the plural of genus, but you read genre. needs changed
27:15 you read "far below" but it is written far "beyond " not much difference here
28:16 one of "immediate" length should be "intermediate" length needs changed
aniroo
I'll try to get to section 20 tomorrow, unless someone else beats me to it.
Are you following along while you listen? The PL level I have is only standard, which means that it should be just smooth listening. Some I will fix, but some I won't because it is beyond standard PL'ing. I will let you know when and which ones I have fixed.
Ann
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Oooops! Sorry I missed that . Just too excited to get started. Guess I should slow down from now on.aniroo wrote:Hi,
Section 19
Just a couple of notes. Not exactly sure how important they are, but mostly it's a case of using the wrong word. In some cases the substitute word is very close in meaning, in some it could change the meaning a little, but not much.
4:59 the word is Huggins's but I think I heard you say Hugginson. It was pretty quick.
6:02 " a red, a crimson, a yellow , a green OR deep blue." The OR should be an AND. I think it changes the meaning.
15:44 the word is "genera" the plural of genus, but you read genre. needs changed
27:15 you read "far below" but it is written far "beyond " not much difference here
28:16 one of "immediate" length should be "intermediate" length needs changed
aniroo
I'll try to get to section 20 tomorrow, unless someone else beats me to it.
aniroo
No, you are fine! I think I was being a little harsh, and I apologize for that. I don't want to make it so that you don't ever want to PL ever again! I will let you know which ones I have fixed, I know for sure I have to fix genera. That one just did not feel right!
Ann
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Section 41 needs two small edits. At the end, you have the outro twice, I think the first one needs to be cut out, that one is at 1:02:46-:52, then at the very end, there is a stray recording that needs to be clipped off. Otherwise, everything else is much, much better!
Ann
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Ok, I have deleted the superfluous outros and the stray recording at the end. So here, once again, is Section 41.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/popularhistoryofastronomy_41_clerke_128kb.mp3 Time: 1:02.5.0
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/popularhistoryofastronomy_41_clerke_128kb.mp3 Time: 1:02.5.0
Russ Bruno
Shasta wrote:Ok, I have deleted the superfluous outros and the stray recording at the end. So here, once again, is Section 41.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/popularhistoryofastronomy_41_clerke_128kb.mp3 Time: 1:02.5.0
Now section 41 is PL OK! Thanks Shasta!
Ann
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