well done Larry, you did the best out of this rather silly tale. How anybody could bother with Hans such a long time as Grethel, I really cannot fathom.
I noticed you got a bit of a knot in your tongue with the very many "dost thou" in the story
but I think we can let them pass. I will not torture you with them any more.
I found the ending rather strange, that Grethel would become Hans' bride after all her ordeal. So I checked the German original, and it is an error in translation. In the German version she left left Hans and was no more his bride. The expression in the original is a bit old and unusual that's why the translator probably made the mistake. But since we cannot change what the author wrote, we leave it in.
Anyway, this story is PL ok
That means we only have one more story to do