COMPLETE [Romance] April's Lady by MW Hungerford -ck

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thank you!
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Chapter 5 is PL OK .. thanks
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thank you molly!
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Hi Carolin -

Can I please take Sections 40 - 48?

Many thanks!
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Thank you lynda!
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Thank you lynda!
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chapter 40 as follows:

Chapter 40

5:59
Don’t take it like that says Barbara (x2, second one is correct version)

6:16
Obvious stumble

7:02*
Reads: but they wouldn’t hear of it
I hear: but they won’t hear of it

7:10
Reads: when I proposed it
I hear: which when I proposed it

8:19*
Reads: he begins his walk up and down
I hear: he begins to walk up and down

8:51*
Reads: it is so often so
I hear: it is often so

9:50*
Reads: Oh, of course, of course
I hear: of course, of course

10:00
Reads: with a suspicion of vehemence
I hear: with suspicion of venemence

10:08
Reads: why a fourth should be made so
I hear: why a fourth shouldn’t be made so

11:05
Reads: but at this instant Joyce appears in the doorway
I hear: but at this instant Joyce appeared in the doorway

11:19*
Reads: says Barbara
I hear: said Barbara

11:28
And Freddy thinks that Felix (would look after us) until we reached
Text in brackets is missing

13:00
Reads: and her manner is so excitable
I hear: and her matter is so excitable

13:58
Reads: You know the old place was let to a Mr.
I hear: You know the old place was to let a Mr.

15:12
Reads: to take nothing unnecessary
I hear: to take nothing unneccessarily
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mzmolly65 wrote:chapter 40 as follows:

Chapter 40

5:59 Completed
Don’t take it like that says Barbara (x2, second one is correct version)

6:16 Completed
Obvious stumble

7:02* Skipped
Reads: but they wouldn’t hear of it
I hear: but they won’t hear of it

7:10 Completed
Reads: when I proposed it
I hear: which when I proposed it

8:19* Skipped
Reads: he begins his walk up and down
I hear: he begins to walk up and down

8:51* Skipped
Reads: it is so often so
I hear: it is often so

9:50* Completed
Reads: Oh, of course, of course
I hear: of course, of course

10:00 Skipped
Reads: with a suspicion of vehemence
I hear: with suspicion of venemence

10:08 Completed
Reads: why a fourth should be made so
I hear: why a fourth shouldn’t be made so

11:05 Skipped
Reads: but at this instant Joyce appears in the doorway
I hear: but at this instant Joyce appeared in the doorway

11:19* Skipped
Reads: says Barbara
I hear: said Barbara

11:28 Completed
And Freddy thinks that Felix (would look after us) until we reached
Text in brackets is missing

13:00 Sounds fine to me
Reads: and her manner is so excitable
I hear: and her matter is so excitable

13:58 Completed
Reads: You know the old place was let to a Mr.
I hear: You know the old place was to let a Mr.

15:12 Completed
Reads: to take nothing unnecessary
I hear: to take nothing unneccessarily
Hi! I made the above corrections to Section 40. I think some of the items above (that I skipped) were very nit picky and would affect the recording more by fixing them as they were so small, rather than leaving them alone.

Section 40 - https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_40_hungerford_128kb.mp3 - 16:10
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Lmnei wrote:
mzmolly65 wrote:
10:00 Skipped
Reads: with a suspicion of vehemence
I hear: with suspicion of venemence

13:00 Sounds fine to me
Reads: and her manner is so excitable
I hear: and her matter is so excitable
I agree on the smaller items, I just posted them for you to decide on. I would have come to the same conclusion as you, that editing them would change the reading more than just leaving them. However, I played these two to an unbiased listener before including them because I wanted to be sure of what I was hearing. I did not tell him what to listen for, only to tell me what he heard. He also heard venemence and matter, rather than vehemence and manner, exactly as I did.

In the end, it's not up to me.

Molly
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thank you both!

lynda, small things are up to you :) it is good to get a complete list of items every now and then though, because sometimes as readers we dont pay quite as much attention to the text as we should. thanks!
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Hi Carolin -

Here is Section 43 - https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/aprilslady_43_hungerford_128kb.mp3 - 10:21

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Hi! I'm very new to LibriVox, but I'm interested in reading for this book. It seems like Chapter One is open, could I be assigned to that?
I'd like to be credited as Nemesis.
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thank you lynda!
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