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Cripple act 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/loveandabottle_cripple_1.mp3

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alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose

Thanks.

Todd

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My Librivox Page Short Plays from Dickens (Full) Devil is an Ass Abe and Mawruss Love and a Bottle (Full) Mrs Tanqueray (Full) Cabinet Minister Best Doctor Pinero - A Study

excellent Alan. You play this crippled beggar exactly like he should be. So hell-bent of inspiring pity in other people, but basically, he sounds as if he is only putting on an act to extract money from good-willed gullible people Perfect. Nothing missing, no errors.

Only problem was the sound there was a very low but screechy noise all throughout the the recording, it hurt my ears to listen to it, so I first had to noise-clean it to make it bearable. Luckily I managed to clean it up very nicely (I'm that good ) and since I had the noise-cleaned file anyway now, I quickly uploaded it myself. So no action from you required anymore. I'll mark it PL ok.

Still, maybe it would be good if you could trace the source of this sound and hopefully get rid of it for your future recordings. Sounded like some electrical thingy.

Sonia

Here's Pamphlet, the bookseller:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/loveandabottle_pamphlet_3.mp3

Apparently he doesn't get out of prison for the rest of the play...

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Cheers,
Ava.
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Thanks.

Todd

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indeed, how tragic

the part you are in though, Ava, is excellently played I loved your sycophantic tone of voice all throughout even though it was clear that Pamphlet does not really approve of Lyric's poetry Well done

PL ok

Sonia

I'll take sections 8-10, Trudge.
Thank you, Sonia, for suggesting this project to me!

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I'll be really busy in October, but if you really need me to do a recording, just give me a nudge.

Thanks.

Todd

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Leanne (leanneyauyau)
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Thanks.

Todd

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great Leanne !!!! I just noticed you are yet again another Lucinda (like in Molière's Physician LOL) and you play her such a flirt, it's excellent. I can't decide which parts I like best, the ones were she is bantering with the boys or the ones where she is seriously berating them.

Acts 1 and 3 are PL ok although Act 3 is wrongly numbered "2", but since there are no errors, I simply make a note in the MW.

Act 4 (numbered 3)
> at 3:03: (p. 84 top) two missing lines "But two distinctions.....etc"

> at 3:07: (p. 87 middle) to my understanding, the letter by Lucinda should be read by Lovewell, but don't delete it yet, I let Todd decide in the end, whether he might want a special effect of Lovewell hearing Lucinda's voice while reading the letter to himself. Maybe Lovewell could start reading, then his voice becoming softer and Lucinda's voice starting up with the rest. I know it's been done in movies...

> actually since you have to reupload anyway, you could also correct the filename

Act 5 (numbered 4)
> at about 3:54: (p. 101 middle) missing line: Page! Page!

> could you also correct the file-name before uploading, please ?

Sonia

Could I be assigned bailiff #1 (act 3)?

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-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
“A good day is when no one shows up and you don’t have to go anywhere.” -- Burt Shavitz (Burt's Bees)

Thanks.

Todd

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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/loveandabottle_lucinda_5.mp3

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Leanne (leanneyauyau)
my librivox page | website | fb page | twitter | soundcloud

Thanks.

Todd

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My Librivox Page Short Plays from Dickens (Full) Devil is an Ass Abe and Mawruss Love and a Bottle (Full) Mrs Tanqueray (Full) Cabinet Minister Best Doctor Pinero - A Study