[COMPLETE] Mystery of the Ravenspurs by Fred M. White-ans
I would never wait for two weeks to listen to a chapter of the Ravenspurs ! Actually your voice has been like an anodyne to my hurting head at the moment while I was listening. And I knew I wouldn't have to constantly note down corrections with your recordings, so it was an easy run-through. I was expecting the odd "food-blooper", but no such luck this time. Laughing would have been a good medicine too
Chapter 49 is PL ok.
Slowly on the mend. My throat it hurting a lot, so recording is out of the question, but unless my headache returns, I can do some PLing still.
Sonia
Chapter 49 is PL ok.
Slowly on the mend. My throat it hurting a lot, so recording is out of the question, but unless my headache returns, I can do some PLing still.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Encouraged to hear that you are on the mend. My hope is that it has about run its course by now.
Chapter 50 has been posted and is ready for a listen at your leisure. Enjoy!
Thanks!!
Chapter 50 has been posted and is ready for a listen at your leisure. Enjoy!
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
yes the headache and fever are gone I guess I will be back to normal in a day or twoRoger wrote:Encouraged to hear that you are on the mend. My hope is that it has about run its course by now.
hehe, Geoffrey finally came to the conclusion that Marion might have a sister (something I already suspected in one of the first 10 chapters I think. Actually as soon as the double showed up. )Chapter 50 has been posted and is ready for a listen at your leisure. Enjoy!
I'm not sure what happened now...has Marion simply opened the window and thrown the key inside for Tchigorsky to use ? Wasn't she supposed to bring the box to Mrs May ? So I guess she chose her side with the Ravenspurs for good now.
And this time I found 2 small errors
> at 4:32: "I am not going to pry into your secrets" - you forgot the little word "no" which makes Ralph's comment sound much more threatening to Marion
> at 9:50: "An exclamation of anger and annoyance came from Tchigorsky" - you say "examination" which makes not much sense really
The rest, perfect as always !
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
I searched several online dictionaries, and even a thesaurus, but couldn't fine any that indicated the word "exclamation" as a food element !
Good catches, both. They have been corrected, and the corrected chapter 50 has been uploaded for a spot check.
Thanks!!
Good catches, both. They have been corrected, and the corrected chapter 50 has been uploaded for a spot check.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
hehe, indeed, you seem to have expanded your field of errors by now (or maybe you weren't hungry when you recorded this bit)Roger wrote:I searched several online dictionaries, and even a thesaurus, but couldn't fine any that indicated the word "exclamation" as a food element !
Chapter 50 now Spot PL ok
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Abell shows up again ! What a surprise, as he was only a minor character right at the beginning. Well, this might be good for Marion, it looks as if those two could come together in the end (if it is a happy end), and then Geoffrey and Vera can marry without breaking Marion's heart. How romantically convenient
I was surprised to hear that Marion does not know Tchigorsky and Ralph knew each other so well. I thought she knew more, but maybe it was only Geoffrey and to a certain extent Vera who know parts of that puzzle.
Well, another great chapter and perfectly read without any errors PL ok again
Sonia
I was surprised to hear that Marion does not know Tchigorsky and Ralph knew each other so well. I thought she knew more, but maybe it was only Geoffrey and to a certain extent Vera who know parts of that puzzle.
Well, another great chapter and perfectly read without any errors PL ok again
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
well done on chapter 52, flawless reading again and PL ok. So the mystery of the key-dropping is explained now, very clever.
90% done, we're heading towards the finishing line
Sonia
90% done, we're heading towards the finishing line
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
Chapter 53 has been posted.
Don't feel the need to PL these last several chapters in a hurry.
I might try to have the recording part of this project wrapped up within a week or so, but please .... PL at your own pace and leisure. There is no rush whatever.
Thanks!!
Don't feel the need to PL these last several chapters in a hurry.
I might try to have the recording part of this project wrapped up within a week or so, but please .... PL at your own pace and leisure. There is no rush whatever.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
finished chapter 53 and I want to know what's in that letter Always these cliff-hangers !
this time, I have a small note again for you:
> at 10:59: "See, I do not address the envelope, but place on it this funny sign that looks like an intoxicated problem in Euclid" - you say "but place it in this funny sign". The sentence is strange enough somehow, but maybe it makes a bit more sense the way it is in the book
The rest, perfect, as usual
Sonia
this time, I have a small note again for you:
> at 10:59: "See, I do not address the envelope, but place on it this funny sign that looks like an intoxicated problem in Euclid" - you say "but place it in this funny sign". The sentence is strange enough somehow, but maybe it makes a bit more sense the way it is in the book
The rest, perfect, as usual
cool, you think we can finish the book over the weekend ? Well, I'll do my best to keep the pace for proofingI might try to have the recording part of this project wrapped up within a week or so
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
That's a great catch, Sonia!
53 has been patched and re-uploaded if you want to spot check it sometime.
I could probably finish editing over the weekend, but I don't want to put any pressure on you. I'm sure you have enough to do already!
Even if I do finish it by the weekend, please don't think that you need to PL my chapters right away.
Thanks!!
53 has been patched and re-uploaded if you want to spot check it sometime.
I could probably finish editing over the weekend, but I don't want to put any pressure on you. I'm sure you have enough to do already!
Even if I do finish it by the weekend, please don't think that you need to PL my chapters right away.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
quickly re-listened to that part and it's PL ok now perfectly edited, as always.Roger wrote:That's a great catch, Sonia!
53 has been patched and re-uploaded if you want to spot check it sometime.
yes I do have quite a lot of PL jobs, but I will always try to find time for the Ravenspurs. Maybe I binge out on them for the grand finale on the weekendI could probably finish editing over the weekend, but I don't want to put any pressure on you. I'm sure you have enough to do already!
Even if I do finish it by the weekend, please don't think that you need to PL my chapters right away.
Sonia
I will be on vacation from Wednesday 27 March till Sunday 14 April
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.
and unable to PL during that time. Thank you for your patience.