COMPLETE [fiction] Elsie Venner by Oliver Wendell Holmes -ck
thank you deon!
Carolin
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_10_holmes_128kb.mp3 0913
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_09_holmes_128kb.mp3 3221
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_09_holmes_128kb.mp3 3221
Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
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Well done Deon! I don't know how you get everything done so quickly.
I do have a some PL notes, though.
Section 7 (Chapter 7, Part 1)
18:56 you say mister where it should be missus
Section 8 (Chapter 7, Part 2)
28:07 there is a repeat on the word "to"
Section 9 (Chapter 8)
8:00 there is a noticeable pause (2s) "the trees of the [pause] Parnassian Grove"
17:04 another noticeable pause/stumble "almost seemed to him [pause] he could"
18:09 3s pause "fact of [pause] muliebrity"
finally from about 20:00 to the end of the recording, it seems unedited. I picked up approx. 15 unedited mistakes and throat clearings. I can give you the times for these or you can go though and find them, whichever you'd prefer.
Section 10 (Chapter 9) is PL OK!
Aside from that last part of Chapter 8, very well read! And of course you know the drill: edit and upload again with the same name.
Melissa
I do have a some PL notes, though.
Section 7 (Chapter 7, Part 1)
18:56 you say mister where it should be missus
Section 8 (Chapter 7, Part 2)
28:07 there is a repeat on the word "to"
Section 9 (Chapter 8)
8:00 there is a noticeable pause (2s) "the trees of the [pause] Parnassian Grove"
17:04 another noticeable pause/stumble "almost seemed to him [pause] he could"
18:09 3s pause "fact of [pause] muliebrity"
finally from about 20:00 to the end of the recording, it seems unedited. I picked up approx. 15 unedited mistakes and throat clearings. I can give you the times for these or you can go though and find them, whichever you'd prefer.
Section 10 (Chapter 9) is PL OK!
Aside from that last part of Chapter 8, very well read! And of course you know the drill: edit and upload again with the same name.
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
Thank you both
Carolin
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_07_holmes_128kb.mp3 3803
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_08_holmes_128kb.mp3 3557
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_09_holmes_128kb.mp3 3111
wrong file uploaded it seems!
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_08_holmes_128kb.mp3 3557
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/elsievenner_09_holmes_128kb.mp3 3111
wrong file uploaded it seems!
Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
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Section 7, 8 and 9 are all now PL OK!
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
thank you both!
Carolin
Thank you deon
Carolin
Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
thank you deon!
Carolin
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Chapter 10 (Section 11) is PL OK!
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
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And just to let everyone know, I will be gone for about a week. I leave on Sunday, so I will be away from my laptop and LibriVox for a while, but I will catch up with listening when I get back, if there is anything for me to listen to.
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?