[COMPLETE] Discovery & Exploration of the Mississippi Valley-tg

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I had to look at your section text to get context to your question. :) If it were me, I'd say the parenthetical words in a somewhat offhand voice, if possible. Or just use a very brief pause (about enough for a breath) to separate it from the main text. Just do what you can. :)
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Thanks for the pointers about the parentheses!

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PL for 13 finished - excellent.
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Thanks!
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PL of section 14 very good. There is one minor edit needed. In the first paragraph of the reading in the 9th line from the text p 166, "French and Iroquois" should read "English and Iroquois". Otherwise excellent. :thumbs:
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Thanks again! I hope to get to this tomorrow.
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Section 14 fixed. The fix occurs around 1:12.
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well done - very nice. PL AOK :clap:
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Thanks very much!
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Thank you!
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Section 19:

25:41 - "composed of... more than a hundred" - long pause in this sentence
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ok - i'll tidy up. is that it?
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I've made the edit and also went through and cleaned up a few other minor pauses.

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PL OK.

Next time you clean up more than what's requested, would you please post the times of the other edits? I'm trusting you didn't accidentally cut off part of a word or something; I don't want to listen to the whole thing again to be sure. ;)
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