[Complete]Dramatized Bible Stories of the OldTest.-ans

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 26th, 2016, 5:06 am

silverquill wrote: Sure, I'd be glad to try another one, especially if all the parts are PL OK to start with.

Thanks Larry, I'll put you in as the editor for "Jacob" - the last part isn't in yet, so the story is not quite ready for editing just yet. As for the parts being PL OK - I've only recently taken over as the BC, and these parts were all PLed earlier (and not by me) so I'm afraid I can't guarantee anything.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 26th, 2016, 5:18 am

AdeledePignerolles wrote:Here's Joseph!
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/dbsot_05_various_128kb.mp3 13:23
Thanks!

Joseph Part 2 is PL OK!

I think the MW is now up to date - all the spot checked chapters are now PL OK as well.

EstherbenSimonides · December 27th, 2016, 6:14 pm

Here's Cain, fixed:
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/dbsot_cain_01.mp3
I took out the word 'of' in the second line at the start.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 27th, 2016, 6:59 pm

Thanks Esther, that's perfect! Now we just need Lamech and Section 1 will be ready to edit!

carteki · Post by **carteki** » December 30th, 2016, 8:53 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/dbsot_18_Elisha_128kb.mp3 15m31 Finished.

Kim

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 31st, 2016, 4:28 am

carteki wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/dbsot_18_Elisha_128kb.mp3 15m31 Finished.

Kim

Thanks Kim, that's PL OK!

I've also fixed Jonah and David Pt 1 myself (they only needed some chapter headings removed and one small edit each) so they are now PL OK as well.

Last bits remaining!

- Section 1 (Adam and Eve) missing "Lamech" (Adele to edit)
- Section 3 (Jacob) missing "Jacob" (Larry to edit)
- Section 11 (Samson) needs one line from the narrator (Zames Curran) and this chapter is not currently claimed for editing.

carteki · Post by **carteki** » December 31st, 2016, 4:51 am

I'll edit ch 11.
Kim

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » December 31st, 2016, 5:06 am

Great! Thanks Kim - we just need that last line from James, unless you want to pre-edit and drop that line in when it comes?

carteki · Post by **carteki** » December 31st, 2016, 6:14 am

Section 11 - missing lines ...
NEW Narrator: p 14 "And they bound him with two new cords, and brought him up from the rock." (originally assigned to Men of Judah)
Samson / Narrator: p15 "Thou hast given this great deliverance into the hand of thy servant: and now shall I die for thirst, and fall into the hand of the uncircumcised?"

Kim

ZamesCurran · Post by **ZamesCurran** » December 31st, 2016, 6:45 am

carteki wrote:Section 11 - missing lines ...
NEW Narrator: p 14 "And they bound him with two new cords, and brought him up from the rock." (originally assigned to Men of Judah)
NEW Narrator: p17 "And he said unto her"
Samson / Narrator: p15 "Thou hast given this great deliverance into the hand of thy servant: and now shall I die for thirst, and fall into the hand of the uncircumcised?"

Kim

SO, those are all mine?

carteki · Post by **carteki** » December 31st, 2016, 6:53 am

Yes, although I've found the one on p17.
Kim

AdeledePignerolles · December 31st, 2016, 8:37 am

I have Section 1 all edited and I'm just waiting for Lamech.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » January 1st, 2017, 12:26 am

James, if you are recording maybe you could do Lamech from Section 1 as well? It's a single paragraph.

I've been in touch with the original claimant but he hasn't been able to complete the 1 min test yet.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » January 1st, 2017, 12:29 am

carteki wrote:Section 11 - missing lines ...
NEW Narrator: p 14 "And they bound him with two new cords, and brought him up from the rock." (originally assigned to Men of Judah)
Samson / Narrator: p15 "Thou hast given this great deliverance into the hand of thy servant: and now shall I die for thirst, and fall into the hand of the uncircumcised?"

Kim

What is the missing Men of Judah line? I can read that one.

carteki · Post by **carteki** » January 1st, 2017, 2:57 am

The line was assigned (and read for) men of Judah, but it is actually a narration. James knows about it.

Thanks