I've proof-listened your chapters. You have a nice, clear reading style - good job! I've got a few small things for you to fix:
Chapter 5:
- too long of a pause at the beginning, can you cut down to less than a second please?
Chapter 6:
- you have 10 seconds of silence at the end, can you cut down to 5 since the chapter is less than 30 minutes long
Chapter 8:
- pause at beginning needs to be less than 1 second
- silence at the end needs to be 10 seconds, you have more like 13
Since you're going to be re-uploading anyway, could you change the file names too? "woodstock" should be spelled with a lowercase "w" and at the end of Chapter 5 it should be _128kb rather than _128kp
That's it!
Just ask if something's unclear. Thanks for being part of this project
