COMPLETE - Wanted: A Pedigree by Martha Finley-mas

linny · Post by **linny** » September 3rd, 2016, 9:40 am

Hi Roohi,
30 and 31 are PL ok.

PL notes for chapter 32
2:50 repeat - of which considering her limited opportunity
6:08-6:13 high level of background noise "gay with flowers of every hue; and beyond these a tiny wooded mossy dell,"
7:54 cell phone ringing "by about three years I should think"

Breeze · Post by **Breeze** » September 6th, 2016, 9:38 pm

Hi Linny,
I finally got around to exporting and uploading some more of my unedited files. I should have done it before since it only takes a minute, but here they are now.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/wantedapedigree_04_finley.flac
10:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/wantedapedigree_05_finley.flac
10:26

Thank you so much for doing this for me. I wish I had the time to do it myself. I actually enjoyed the tiny bit I listened to while checking the running times.

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 6th, 2016, 11:51 pm

32 fixed
33,34,35,uploaded
MW updated

linny · Post by **linny** » September 7th, 2016, 8:39 am

Roohi wrote:32 fixed
33,34,35,uploaded
MW updated

Roohi,
Please check that you uploaded 32 with the same title. The one in the MW doesn't contain the edits from the PL notes.

Please verify the correct version of 33 was uploaded. This one has a 2 minute silence mid way through. The duration of the file doesn't match what is in the MW

Chapter 34 - This may also be the wrong file as the time does not match what is in the MW. Please let me know if it is since I will need to do a full PL and not a spot check.

11:54 stumble - And I think you may trust me to manage the thing in a way not to compromise you in the least.
11:59 noise followed by long pause
12:31 at which he expressed no little surprise; remarking that
read as remark
14:09 missing text - filled up the days most pleasantly.
Please trim ending silence. It's almost 7 seconds and we only need 5 seconds.

Chapter 35
Please check this file as well. The time in the MW is off by 4 minutes.

linny · Post by **linny** » September 7th, 2016, 9:10 am

Chapter 4 edited - now 10:37 and PL ok. https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/wantedapedigree_04_finley_128kb.mp3

Chapter 5 edited, amplified and noise cleaned - now 14:12 and PL ok https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/wantedapedigree_05_finley_128kb.mp3

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 8th, 2016, 9:00 pm

MW updated with the correct files
roohi

linny · Post by **linny** » September 9th, 2016, 6:21 am

32 is spot check PL ok.

linny · Post by **linny** » September 9th, 2016, 12:06 pm

33 PL notes
1:41 repeat - It is my purpose to ride with my little daughter every day.
12:34 stumble - No, surely, there can be no danger

34 is PL Ok

35 PL notes
Please trim opening silence to less than 1 second.
2:59 but I will not allow you to injure yourself in preparing them.
Read as enjoy
5:55-6:04 background noise from "my will...possibly or not"
11:36-11:49 repeat - "Old Dinah was highly pleased...for to spend"

FYI: The use of the tool to Generate silence creates absolute silence. When inserted as pauses into a reading it sounds very unnatural and strange. Also, I think it would be more helpful to use your original ending silence as a noise profile and do noise cleaning on your recordings rather than to replace with generated silence and skip noise cleaning.

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 9th, 2016, 2:14 pm

Ok thanks

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 11th, 2016, 2:11 am

33, 35 fixed
36 uploaded
MW updated
roohi

linny · Post by **linny** » September 11th, 2016, 7:31 am

33 and 35 are PL OK

PL note for chapter 36
21:10 missing text - "It would gratify me much," said Dr. Monteith, with emotion.

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 14th, 2016, 3:57 am

37 uploadedMW updated

linny · Post by **linny** » September 14th, 2016, 4:52 pm

PL notes for Chapter 37
0:33 missing text - Of late, he had not looked forward to this home-coming with the unalloyed pleasure he experienced in his anticipations of the Christmas holidays.

4:09 I don't mean to include you in the condemnatory sentence
Read as silence

20:58 repeat - he asked, passing his fingers through her hair and pushing it back from her forehead.

24:11 long pause mid paragraph just before "Will you go down to tea?"

Roohi · Post by **Roohi** » September 15th, 2016, 3:28 am

36,37 fixed
MW updated
roohi

linny · Post by **linny** » September 15th, 2016, 1:11 pm

Both are pl ok.