COMPLETE Caliban by the Yellow Sands by MacKaye-mas

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » August 5th, 2016, 10:03 pm

plaidsicle wrote:PL notes for section 40

at ~0:07 I hear "gentle man" but the text says "gentle madam"

otherwise, perfect!

Noted, will re-record asap.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 11th, 2016, 2:34 pm

PL notes for 44 (and 47, I guess?)

the lines for Lucius as well as for Boy are in this file. all are PL okay except for the line at 0:13--
the text has "there he unarms him." but I heard "unarm him."

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 11th, 2016, 2:38 pm

section 53 is PL okay.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 11th, 2016, 2:40 pm

and 65 is PL okay.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 11th, 2016, 2:50 pm

hm.. section 74 was linked under 73 by accident, it looks like. I've taken the liberty of re-arranging that so the link matches the role.

and 74 is PL okay.

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » August 11th, 2016, 7:55 pm

plaidsicle wrote:PL notes for 44 (and 47, I guess?)

the lines for Lucius as well as for Boy are in this file. all are PL okay except for the line at 0:13--
the text has "there he unarms him." but I heard "unarm him."

Noted!

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 16th, 2016, 3:35 pm

PL notes for section 78:

at 0:44, the line in the text is "makes a beast a man, in some other a man a beast" but I hear "makes a beast of a man, in some other a man of a beast."
the meaning is the same really, but backwards... but if word-perfect is important, it the "of"s should probably be edited out.

at 1:10 there is a word missing "and the fattest..."

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » August 17th, 2016, 4:11 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_eros_1.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_theboy_1.mp3

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 18th, 2016, 8:22 pm

PL notes for section 81

at ~0.27 I hear "but til it's one o'clock" -- the text has "but till 'tis one o'clock"
really minor, and the meaning isn't changed, but if word-perfect is what we're after I thought I'd note it.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 18th, 2016, 8:24 pm

80 and 87 are PL okay.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 18th, 2016, 8:29 pm

40 is PL okay after spot-listen.

plaidsicle wrote:PL notes for 44 (and 47, I guess?)

the lines for Lucius as well as for Boy are in this file. all are PL okay except for the line at 0:13--
the text has "there he unarms him." but I heard "unarm him."

after a spot PL of section 44, I still hear "unarm" instead of "unarms"

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » August 19th, 2016, 6:45 am

plaidsicle wrote:
after a spot PL of section 44, I still hear "unarm" instead of "unarms"

Not to contest your judgement, but are you sure? I'm listening to the file I uploaded and the S is rather clear to me...

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 19th, 2016, 7:09 am

I wonder if my browser has cached the old file or something-- that has happened to me once before. let me try in another browser.

plaidsicle · Post by **plaidsicle** » August 20th, 2016, 6:35 am

you're right, it's all fixed. I have a weird cacheing issue to watch out for. 44 (and 47) are PL okay!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » August 21st, 2016, 6:24 am

Okay, well I really want to read Lorenzo, my first ever role on stage!

If there is another part that doesn't conflict with this, I'd be glad to take it on too. Unfortunately, it looks as if Ariel appears in the same scene, which would be my second pick, but I'm open to another section