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Post by mlee » July 24th, 2016, 10:05 am

July 24, 2016
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RE: May i read Section 28 Chapter 25

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Post by fiddlesticks » July 25th, 2016, 8:05 am

You sure can!
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Post by mlee » July 25th, 2016, 10:52 am

fiddlesticks wrote:You sure can!

July 24, 2016
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RE Here is Section 28 Chapter 25 Genesis

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_28_henry_128kb.mp3

Time 44:39

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Post by fiddlesticks » July 25th, 2016, 11:26 am

Thank you!
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Post by linny » July 25th, 2016, 4:04 pm

mlee wrote:July 24, 2016
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RE Here is Section 28 Chapter 25 Genesis

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_28_henry_128kb.mp3

Time 44:39

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Hi mlee,
I believe you missed a note in the opening post: Please read the numbers as shown here to lessen the confusion for listeners 'Numeral 1' for the latin numbers 'I', 'Number 1' for the normal numbers '1', 'Subscript 1' for the '(1.)' and 'sub point 1' for [1.]

There are a number of places where you state a number without saying "number" but I think those will be ok. The following however should be corrected.

23:13 Note, (1) should be read as Note, subscript 1.
23:31 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
24:01 [1.] should be read as subpoint 1.
24:38 [2.] should be read as subpoint 2.
26:41 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
27:00 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
28:01 Note, (1) should be read as Note, subscript 1.
28:35 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
29:04 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
29:15 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
29:49 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
30:28 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
30:56 [1.] should be read as subpoint 1.
31:10 [2.] should be read as subpoint 2.
31:44 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
32:11 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
38:42 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
39:06 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
39:33 (3.) should be read as subscript 3.
42:15 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
42:58 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.

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Post by mlee » July 26th, 2016, 9:28 am

linny wrote:
mlee wrote:July 24, 2016
FROM mlee
RE Here is Section 28 Chapter 25 Genesis

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_28_henry_128kb.mp3

Time 44:39

mlee
Hi mlee,
I believe you missed a note in the opening post: Please read the numbers as shown here to lessen the confusion for listeners 'Numeral 1' for the latin numbers 'I', 'Number 1' for the normal numbers '1', 'Subscript 1' for the '(1.)' and 'sub point 1' for [1.]

There are a number of places where you state a number without saying "number" but I think those will be ok. The following however should be corrected.

23:13 Note, (1) should be read as Note, subscript 1.
23:31 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
24:01 [1.] should be read as subpoint 1.
24:38 [2.] should be read as subpoint 2.
26:41 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
27:00 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
28:01 Note, (1) should be read as Note, subscript 1.
28:35 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
29:04 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
29:15 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
29:49 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
30:28 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
30:56 [1.] should be read as subpoint 1.
31:10 [2.] should be read as subpoint 2.
31:44 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
32:11 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
38:42 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
39:06 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.
39:33 (3.) should be read as subscript 3.
42:15 (1) should be read as subscript 1.
42:58 (2.) should be read as subscript 2.


July 26 2016
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RE Changes from saying "number" to "subscript" and subpoint". I fear I have not caught all of the changes or that I said subscript instead of subpoint. linney, I wonder if it would sound better if you had someone read it fresh with Numerals, Numbers, Scripts and Points the way it should be. I am not proud of this presentation as it now stands. I suggest we put out a an excellent product. I dont want my name on this one.

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Post by linny » July 26th, 2016, 9:41 am

mlee wrote:July 26 2016
FROM mlee
RE Changes from saying "number" to "subscript" and subpoint". I fear I have not caught all of the changes or that I said subscript instead of subpoint. linney, I wonder if it would sound better if you had someone read it fresh with Numerals, Numbers, Scripts and Points the way it should be. I am not proud of this presentation as it now stands. I suggest we put out a an excellent product. I dont want my name on this one.
I thought this was a wonderful reading. It would be very disappointing not to use it.

If it's the editing that distresses you I would be happy to take care of it for you. If you could submit a recording with the following I can take care of the rest.

"Subscript 1, subscript 2, subscript 3, sub point 1, sub point 2."

I hope you will agree with this option.

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Post by mlee » July 26th, 2016, 10:01 am

linny wrote:
mlee wrote:July 26 2016
FROM mlee
RE Changes from saying "number" to "subscript" and subpoint". I fear I have not caught all of the changes or that I said subscript instead of subpoint. linney, I wonder if it would sound better if you had someone read it fresh with Numerals, Numbers, Scripts and Points the way it should be. I am not proud of this presentation as it now stands. I suggest we put out a an excellent product. I dont want my name on this one.
I thought this was a wonderful reading. It would be very disappointing not to use it.

If it's the editing that distresses you I would be happy to take care of it for you. If you could submit a recording with the following I can take care of the rest.

"Subscript 1, subscript 2, subscript 3, sub point 1, sub point 2."

I hope you will agree with this option.

July 26, 2016
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RE Section 28 Chapter 25 I have made the changes and I will send the corrected Section to you and you can listen.

mlee

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Post by mlee » July 26th, 2016, 10:48 am

mlee wrote:
linny wrote:
mlee wrote:July 26 2016
FROM mlee
RE Changes from saying "number" to "subscript" and subpoint". I fear I have not caught all of the changes or that I said subscript instead of subpoint. linney, I wonder if it would sound better if you had someone read it fresh with Numerals, Numbers, Scripts and Points the way it should be. I am not proud of this presentation as it now stands. I suggest we put out a an excellent product. I dont want my name on this one.
I thought this was a wonderful reading. It would be very disappointing not to use it.

If it's the editing that distresses you I would be happy to take care of it for you. If you could submit a recording with the following I can take care of the rest.

"Subscript 1, subscript 2, subscript 3, sub point 1, sub point 2."

I hope you will agree with this option.

July 26, 2016
FROM mlee

RE Section 28 Chapter 25 I have made the changes and I will send the corrected Section to you and you can listen.

mlee



July 26, 2016
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RE #2 Section 28 Chapter 25 with changes. I tried to equalize the volume but it didnt work so the changes are louder

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_28_henry_128kb.mp3

If I missed the suggested changes please list them again and I will correct.

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Post by linny » July 26th, 2016, 11:27 am

mlee,
You got them all. Thank you so much for not giving up on this section. PL ok! :clap:

While I PL spot checked, I followed along in Audacity so I amplified each by -4. It may have helped level out the edits. Let me know if you disagree. https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_28_henry_128kb.mp3

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Post by MaryAnnSpiegel » July 27th, 2016, 9:36 pm

May I read chapter 6?
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Post by fiddlesticks » July 28th, 2016, 12:54 pm

Thank you!
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Post by linny » July 28th, 2016, 2:19 pm

solidrockfaith wrote:
Hello!

Please remember to post the duration when you post your link. It helps me know how much time to set aside to PL and it helps at cataloging to verify the entire link transferred and didn't get cut off.

These recorders tend to pick up everything we don't want them to. You moved papers around a few times. Some were very mild and not worth noting. These however stand out:
3:40 only bring not my son thither again. 9 And the servant put his hand under the thigh of Abraham his master
9:54 have good reason to expect prosperity and success in them. God will cause that to issue in our comfort
13:58 background noise is during a breath so it should be easier to delete.
28:59 33 And there was set meat before him to eat: but he said, I will not eat, until I have told mine errand. And he said, Speak on.

Additionally:
12:15 - Repeat "And the servant ran to meet her, and said, Let me, I pray thee, drink a little water of thy pitcher."
31:31 - 48 And I bowed down my head, and worshipped the Lord, and blessed the Lord God of my master Abraham, which had led me in the right way to take my master's brother's daughter unto his son.
Read unto him. I believe this changes intent.
49:47 - (ch. xxii. 17),
Read as chapter 27, verse 17

Lastly, when you post your revision please change the file name from http://uploads.librivox.org/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_24_henry_128kb.mp3 to http://uploads.librivox.org/rapunzelina/commentarygenesis_27_henry_128kb.mp3

You have done a great job with this. Your pacing is so easy to follow. Thank you. :D

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Post by linny » July 28th, 2016, 2:19 pm

MaryAnnSpiegel wrote:May I read chapter 6?
MaryAnn
Tiffany, I think you missed a claim.

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