COMPLETE [Dram Read] The Teacup Club by Eliza Armstrong - kd

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Thanks Jennifer
Michele
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I'm working on Evelyn for Chap 8.

She has a line: He replied that it looked as if the interest was all about all he could afford.

To me - I think that first "all" looks like a typo. Makes a lot more sense to read: He replied that it looked as if the interest was about all he could afford.

What do you say? Can I deviate from our text that much?
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JenniferFour wrote:I'm working on Evelyn for Chap 8.

She has a line: He replied that it looked as if the interest was all about all he could afford.

To me - I think that first "all" looks like a typo. Makes a lot more sense to read: He replied that it looked as if the interest was about all he could afford.

What do you say? Can I deviate from our text that much?
Hi Jennifer yes I don't think it makes sense as it is originally so not a problem to alter this. thanks
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When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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wib66 wrote:
JenniferFour wrote:I'm working on Evelyn for Chap 8.

She has a line: He replied that it looked as if the interest was all about all he could afford.

To me - I think that first "all" looks like a typo. Makes a lot more sense to read: He replied that it looked as if the interest was about all he could afford.

What do you say? Can I deviate from our text that much?
Hi Jennifer yes I don't think it makes sense as it is originally so not a problem to alter this. thanks
Excellent! Your timing is perfect. I just finished editing that except for that phrase. Will delete that extra and upload 2 more sections for you - then I think I am done with this for the night! I love this play but it is certainly taking longer to record/edit than I anticipated!
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Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Evelyn chapters 1 to 8 are PL OK thanks
Michele
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wib66 wrote:Evelyn chapters 1 to 8 are PL OK thanks

Thanks! I have hopes to finish up Evelyn's part this weekend.
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JenniferFour wrote: I love this play but it is certainly taking longer to record/edit than I anticipated!
Well, Evelyn is the biggest part, by quite a significant margin! I counted up all the lines at one point, and she has probably more than anyone else by about 30%.
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Elizabby wrote:
JenniferFour wrote: I love this play but it is certainly taking longer to record/edit than I anticipated!
Well, Evelyn is the biggest part, by quite a significant margin! I counted up all the lines at one point, and she has probably more than anyone else by about 30%.
I didn't know that! I asked for her part because Evelyn was my grandmother's name :)
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Michele
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I'm considering just reading "said" and copying and pasting it all. I feel my narration is rather redundant in a dramatic reading :lol:

Here's chapter 2, more to come over the next week or so

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/teacupclub_narrator_02.mp3
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