COMPLETE: War Surgery From Firing Line to Base- Hughes -jo

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 11th, 2016, 11:38 am

ok, do you need me to DPL the rest of the project? or is Silverquil returning later to finish? I don't want to double anything up.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 11th, 2016, 1:58 pm

PL Notes:

Ch 4 - The Bacteria of Wounds, Pt I

PL OK, please update in magic window.

Post by **knotyouraveragejo** » March 12th, 2016, 2:37 pm

Thanks for the PL, afutterer.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 12th, 2016, 7:34 pm

no problem! I will continue on with PL for this project Monday. I must say though... I listened to one section and it was very intense. I loved it! I have to give a big #pat-on-the-back to you for reading that whole section without a stumble. Either you are a doctor or you had to spend a lot of time rehearsing, because it was very jargon rich.

That extends to all the readers on this project. Really exciting!

VfkaBT · Post by **VfkaBT** » March 13th, 2016, 8:24 am

Thanks for your help; it's an important work, I think, that improved conditions for our fighting men the world over.

Post by **knotyouraveragejo** » March 13th, 2016, 1:57 pm

afutterer wrote:I must say though... I listened to one section and it was very intense. I loved it! I have to give a big #pat-on-the-back to you for reading that whole section without a stumble. Either you are a doctor or you had to spend a lot of time rehearsing, because it was very jargon rich. That extends to all the readers on this project. Really exciting!

Let's just say I'm relatively familiar with the subject matter. I never rehearse anything I read for LibriVox, nor do I ever record an entire section without mistakes. Careful editing works wonders!

Glad you are enjoying the book. I'm going to give you access to the MW as the DPL on this project at least for the time being since we have no idea when Silverquill might be back. That way you can update the MW as you go.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 13th, 2016, 3:52 pm

sounds good. Thanks!

Post by **icequeen** » March 13th, 2016, 8:20 pm

Could I have section 23, Injuries of the Head?

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 14th, 2016, 9:16 am

PL Notes:

Ch 5 - Wound Infection

~0:02 - Remove "Section seven" from introduction.
~0:25-0:28 - Replace with specified introduction wording "War Surgery - From Firing Line to Base, by Basil Hughes and H. Stanley Banks. [Chapter [number], [Chapter title], Part [number]"
~0:54 - Stumble at "...which still stood..."
~33.41 - Stumble at "limb"
~43:14 - Repetition of the phrase "...is the fact..."
~50:28 - Remove "Section seven" from outro.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 14th, 2016, 12:39 pm

PL Notes:

Ch 7 - General Complications of Wounds 1

PL OK

VfkaBT · Post by **VfkaBT** » March 14th, 2016, 6:13 pm

icequeen wrote:Could I have section 23, Injuries of the Head?

MW updated; thanks, Ann.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 15th, 2016, 4:43 am

PL Notes:

Ch 8 - General Complications of Wounds 2

Very well done! The only thing I found was that there should only be 5 seconds of silence at the end and there are 10 seconds at present. Please trim 5 seconds off. Thanks.

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 15th, 2016, 6:33 am

PL Notes:

Ch 9 - General Complications of Wounds 3

Please cut the end silence to 5 seconds. Thats it. Very good reading!

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 15th, 2016, 12:07 pm

PL Notes:

Ch 10 - Septicemia

PL OK

afutterer · Post by **afutterer** » March 15th, 2016, 12:08 pm

PL Notes:

Ch 11 - Effects of Climate, etc.

PL OK