[COMPLETE] Marion de Lorme by Victor Hugo-ans

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Elizabby
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MrsHand wrote:Here is Didier. Just so you know, I found no speaking lines for Didier in Act 4. They talk an awful lot about him, but it does not appear that he speaks.

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_didier_1.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_didier_2.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_didier_3.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_didier_5.flac
I agree with you about Act 4. Acts 1, 2 and 3 are PL OK! :thumbs:

I'll do Act 5 another night. It's the longest one and it is getting late here tonight.
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Didier Act 5, just two PL notes!

@10:13 line should be "There's naught but you to fly from, in this world."

@13:03 line should be "In God's name, before whom I soon shall stand"
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Post by davidpr »

Hello,

Could I read for "M. de Laffemas" please?

Regards
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Post by Kristingj »

davidpr wrote:Hello,

Could I read for "M. de Laffemas" please?

Regards
David
Of course:)
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Elizabby wrote:Marion de Lorme, PL notes:

Act 1:
@00:08 should be "Not such close..."
@00:12 "Marquis" is usually pronounced without the "s" on the end, as in French. Don't know if you want to change this.
(also at 00:58, 2:35)
@3:08 an extra word "This is a theology, it seems to me" (optional to correct, both versions make sense)

Act 2:
@00:31 extra word "Why is this good-bye?" (Optional correction)
@00:45 a repeat of "condemned to death" (I think the second version is better)
@00:59 should be "brought her here" (refers to Death, not Didier)
@01:22 stumble which can come out in editing

Act 3:
@00:52 sounds like something hit the mic, but I think should be easily able to be edited out.

Act 4:
@00:49 Two minor mistakes "That's very well my Lord. When shall I see the King?" (Optional)
There are a couple of long pauses during the big speech which will need to be closed up in editing.
@04:08 line is unclear "I'll fly to save the prisoners!"

Act 5:
@01:07 should be "This night!"
@04:38 should be "for ever more gone by?"
@05:15 editing stutter at "All things to me" should come out in editing.
@06:07 should be "now it is your turn"
@09:17 should be "now if in you there's anything that"

Strange play!
All has been fixed and uploaded:) Yes, it's a very strange play:P
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Post by lezer »

Hi Kristin,
I could read:
Act 4 - An Usher
Act 5 - The Turnkey
If that's ok.
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lezer wrote:Hi Kristin,
I could read:
Act 4 - An Usher
Act 5 - The Turnkey
If that's ok.
All yours:)
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Act 4 - An Usher
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_usher_4.flac
Act 5 - The Turnkey
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_turnkey_5.flac

I’ve read the „role read by” both separately, but also once together („An usher and the turnkey read by …”) - you can choose. They are both very very small parts :)
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lezer wrote:Act 4 - An Usher
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_usher_4.flac
Act 5 - The Turnkey
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/mariondelorme_turnkey_5.flac

I’ve read the „role read by” both separately, but also once together („An usher and the turnkey read by …”) - you can choose. They are both very very small parts :)
Thanks:)
Kristin

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All the Marion de Lorme files are now PL OK! :thumbs:

I'm getting a bit backlogged, I'm afraid, as I need to do some recording myself, and I'm working this weekend. I won't be able to do any more PLing on this project for about 2 weeks, I don't think.
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Post by Kristingj »

Elizabby wrote:All the Marion de Lorme files are now PL OK! :thumbs:

I'm getting a bit backlogged, I'm afraid, as I need to do some recording myself, and I'm working this weekend. I won't be able to do any more PLing on this project for about 2 weeks, I don't think.
All fine:)
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Elizabby wrote:Didier Act 5, just two PL notes!

@10:13 line should be "There's naught but you to fly from, in this world."

@13:03 line should be "In God's name, before whom I soon shall stand"

I will make sure to get this fixed. Right now I'm fighting a cold, so my voice sounds more appropriate for a man, but won't work for fixing lines. LOL
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Didier is now PL OK! :thumbs:
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