COMPLETE: Cradock Nowell Vol. 1 by R.D. Blackmore - jo

Post by **Lynnet** » February 26th, 2015, 9:07 am

Chapter 27 is ready for PL.

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » February 26th, 2015, 10:58 am

Pl for chapter 24
03:26 delete 'not' from ' he felt that he could fall on his knees
33:42 delete stumble in 'Nowell corklemore is an ass'
you could also remove slight pause that is before this paragraph
Another pause and stumble at end of paragraph ' Nowell corklemore is an ass'

Post by **Lynnet** » February 26th, 2015, 12:31 pm

The last chapter is ready for PL

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » February 27th, 2015, 7:20 am

PL chapter 25
04:55 repeated 'than that of their rude male fingers'

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » February 27th, 2015, 9:37 am

PL chapter 26
16:40 is there a double 'of' in 5000l per annum
17:10 said 'till you have craved yours' text is ' till I have craved yours'

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » February 27th, 2015, 10:32 am

PL now OK for chapters 22 and 23

Chapter 24
33:53 another Stumble over Nowell corklemore

Shelagh

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » February 28th, 2015, 9:21 am

Chapters 24, 25, and 26 now OK

Chapter 27
08:39 repeated 'when they came on a Sunday'
24:03 please check you said 'cork' in 'like a lively cork'

Shelagh

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » March 2nd, 2015, 4:39 am

PL for chapter 28
13:44 said I dare you to think so' text is ' I dare say you think so'

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » March 3rd, 2015, 11:32 am

Pl for chapter 27 - now OK

Shelagh

Post by **Lynnet** » March 3rd, 2015, 11:38 am

shelagh wrote:Pl for chapter 27 - now OK

Shelagh

Thank you. The last chapter will have to wait until my next recording session as I will have to re-record that sentence. I will post when it is done so you don't have to keep checking back.
Some of these sentences are really convoluted and just don't trip off the tongue... And Nowell Corklemore is a pain in the neck

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » March 3rd, 2015, 11:58 am

Lynnet wrote:
shelagh wrote:Pl for chapter 27 - now OK

Shelagh
Thank you. The last chapter will have to wait until my next recording session as I will have to re-record that sentence. I will post when it is done so you don't have to keep checking back.
Some of these sentences are really convoluted and just don't trip off the tongue... And Nowell Corklemore is a pain in the neck

Thanks, I'll wait for you post

I think you did a fantastic job and I also enjoyed the writing, such great descriptive writing makes the scenes come to life

If you read more of this and are looking for a dpl just send me a pm.

Shelagh

Post by **Lynnet** » March 5th, 2015, 11:06 am

Chapter 28 is ready for spot PL.
Thank you for your help in finishing this off, Shelagh.

shelagh · Post by **shelagh** » March 6th, 2015, 3:20 pm

PL now O K for chapter 28

I am sure many listeners will enjoy this

Shelagh

Post by **Lynnet** » March 6th, 2015, 4:14 pm

shelagh wrote:PL now O K for chapter 28

I am sure many listeners will enjoy this

Shelagh

Thank you. I'll let Jo know

Post by **knotyouraveragejo** » March 6th, 2015, 4:30 pm

I'm following the thread, Lynne. Will catalog over the weekend.