COMPLETE - Further Chronicles of Avonlea-Montgomery-mas

[Elizabby]

Oh, an update to my post above! I went through sarahelizabeth posts and I found a more recent file that includes that missing line The filename was different, so that's why the file I got from the MW the first time was missing it. But OK now!
So, only that short phrase by the narrator, or is that too somewhere within the thread?

No, if it isn't in the original file it isn't there. I can do it, no problem. Do you want it in the narrator file or separately?

Also, I have another narration file still to do - I haven't forgotten! I had done half of it but realized there was a ridiculous amount of background noise from the kids, so I will need to redo it.

[SweetPea]

Here's Story 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_13_montgomery_128kb.mp3
Sweet Pea

[SweetPea]

Oh my, what fun! PLEEEEASE can I edit Story 14?

[MaryAnnSpiegel]

Sweet Pea,
I'll defer to Rapunzelina on Section 14 - because I don't know what she has started.

What is the finished time on Section 13?

MaryAnn

[Elizabby]

Y'all are do quick! I'll PL those stories as soon as I can, and get you the narrator file for Story 12.

[Rapunzelina]

No, if it isn't in the original file it isn't there. I can do it, no problem. Do you want it in the narrator file or separately?

Also, I have another narration file still to do - I haven't forgotten! I had done half of it but realized there was a ridiculous amount of background noise from the kids, so I will need to redo it.

Thanks Beth! You can either send it separately or recorded in the end of your next narration file, if you happen to do them in the same recording session.

Oh my, what fun! PLEEEEASE can I edit Story 14?

You'll be a very prolific editor! You're a great help! Have fun doing Story 14!

[Elizabby]

Final Chapter 13:

at 12:15 there is a paragraph missing from Flora Jane's speech (pink) following "Flora Jane lifted her chin" from the narrator.

@ 13:12 I think the incorrect speech follows the narration "She put her hand on his snowy arm appealingly" (the next speech should be Mary Bell saying "Oh David, won't you testify..." The following two speeches by David Bell are also out of order. See the text and you'll see what I mean.

@ 13:29 there is a stutter which sounds like an editing problem in the word "success" in the phrase "you are hindering the success of the revival" (though it could have been in the original file, I can't actually tell.)

(Just a tip - it might be easier to start with my last note and work backwards making the corrections. Otherwise the time stamps will all be off by the amount of time inserted as you make the first change.)

All the rest is PL OK - very smoothly edited and I appreciate that you left 5 seconds of silence at the end. Well done!

[Elizabby]

Narration for Story 12 - In Her Selfless Mood.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_narrator_12.mp3 (31:19)

(Since I'm the DPL and I can't PL this for myself, I suggest the editor just check it as you edit it in, and I'll PL the whole assembled file. I've checked as best I can, and it isn't quite word perfect but I think all the sense of it is there.)

Please note that there are TEN seconds of silence at the end of this file, as required for a file over 30mins.

Please note there are two colour coding mistakes, and I think these lines may need to be re-recorded:

"Chris," (she said sharply) "you get right off for the cows, you lazy little scamp! You knew right well you had to go for them, and here you've been idling, and me looking high and low for you. Make haste now; it's ridiculous late."

This line is coloured blue for Naomi but actually belongs to Caroline (Frances).

At 18:57 in my recording there is a line which is not coloured but belongs to Christopher: "Eunice, I've a notion to get married this spring." I'm a bit worried about this line, as Arnaldo has not been on Librivox since April. Still, probably best to message him and see if he can do it.

At 20:48 there is another line for Caroline (Frances): "I told you so." (This one is optional, and I've recorded it as part of the narration, but if you are picking up another line anyway I think it would be better spoken by the character voice.)

[Elizabby]

And here's that missing line from Story 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_reply_09.mp3

[Rapunzelina]

Thank you Beth!
I'll work on Story 12 next then.

In the meantime, stories 9 and 10 uploaded and in MW:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_09_montgomery_128kb.mp3 17:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_10_montgomery_128kb.mp3 35:15

[SweetPea]

Here's Story 14. I'll get to work on fixing Story 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_14_montgomery_128kb.mp3 17:55
Sweet Pea

[SweetPea]

Here's Story 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_13_128kb.mp3 21:07
Sweet Pea

[Rapunzelina]

Narration for Story 12 - In Her Selfless Mood.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_narrator_12.mp3 (31:19)

(Since I'm the DPL and I can't PL this for myself, I suggest the editor just check it as you edit it in, and I'll PL the whole assembled file. I've checked as best I can, and it isn't quite word perfect but I think all the sense of it is there.)

Please note that there are TEN seconds of silence at the end of this file, as required for a file over 30mins.

Please note there are two colour coding mistakes, and I think these lines may need to be re-recorded:

"Chris," (she said sharply) "you get right off for the cows, you lazy little scamp! You knew right well you had to go for them, and here you've been idling, and me looking high and low for you. Make haste now; it's ridiculous late."

This line is coloured blue for Naomi but actually belongs to Caroline (Frances).

At 18:57 in my recording there is a line which is not coloured but belongs to Christopher: "Eunice, I've a notion to get married this spring." I'm a bit worried about this line, as Arnaldo has not been on Librivox since April. Still, probably best to message him and see if he can do it.

At 20:48 there is another line for Caroline (Frances): "I told you so." (This one is optional, and I've recorded it as part of the narration, but if you are picking up another line anyway I think it would be better spoken by the character voice.)

PL OK for the narration for story 12!
And I've put it together, Arnaldo had included that line thankfully,
what's missing is only Frances' lines for Caroline:

"Chris," (she said sharply) "you get right off for the cows, you lazy little scamp! You knew right well you had to go for them, and here you've been idling, and me looking high and low for you. Make haste now; it's ridiculous late."

and the optional "I told you so."

[Elizabby]

Here's Story 13.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_13_128kb.mp3 21:07
Sweet Pea

I think there might have been a problem with the uploader - I only have a 12 minute file! Give it another go and just let the uploader sit with it for a good long time to make sure the file uploads fully.

[Elizabby]

Here's Story 14.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/furtherchroniclesofavonlea_14_montgomery_128kb.mp3 17:55
Sweet Pea

At 14:38 the cry "Owen!" from Phillipa is missing.
@ 15:17 Owen's line "Which of us will you marry, Phillippa?" is missing.

The last five seconds of silence have some odd hissing sounds. It might be better to either do a noise cleaning on that last bit, or else just find some silence in the narrator file and paste it in.