(COMPLETE) [DRAM.READ] Triumph o/t Scarlet Pimpernel - m8b1

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 6th, 2014, 1:43 pm

Trotsa wrote:PL notes for Chapter 17:

Just little things. I know you are not very picky, but I thought I would mention these two, just in case they need changing...

03:44 Narrator: it says "apparently he had no heart" should be "apparently he had not heard"

14:05 Betrand: it says "I could have had such happy dreams here" should say " I could have such happy dreams here"

Thanks for noticing those! I think the Bertrand one can be let go.

I'll have a look at the text for the other one, but it sounds like a significant error which should be fixed.

neustar · Post by **neustar** » May 6th, 2014, 4:01 pm

Elizabby wrote:
Trotsa wrote:PL notes for Chapter 17:

Just little things. I know you are not very picky, but I thought I would mention these two, just in case they need changing...

03:44 Narrator: it says "apparently he had no heart" should be "apparently he had not heard"

14:05 Betrand: it says "I could have had such happy dreams here" should say " I could have such happy dreams here"
Thanks for noticing those! I think the Bertrand one can be let go.

I'll have a look at the text for the other one, but it sounds like a significant error which should be fixed.

I'll fix the narration goof.

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » May 6th, 2014, 4:58 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/triumphofthescarletpimpernel_16_orczy.mp3

21:26

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 7th, 2014, 12:52 pm

PL notes for chapter 18:

PL OK!

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 7th, 2014, 1:21 pm

PL notes for chapter 19:

12:58 it says "Josephine______________and the boy Jacques..."
should be: Josephine was a pupil-teacher at a young ladies' finishing off school, and the boy, Jacques...
and right after Jacques: 'were', should be was."

13:40, missing paragraph. Should be: 'Whereupon Madame de Fontenay sighed again, and expressed the hope that one day Fate would bring her together with the de Servals.

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 7th, 2014, 1:25 pm

Chapter 16 spot checked and PL OK!

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 8th, 2014, 11:24 am

I am planning to PL chapters 13 & 15.... just so you know!

jeanie1914 · Post by **jeanie1914** » May 8th, 2014, 11:43 am

Hi, I know this is a dumb question, but since I can't find it, I supose I had better ask, where do I find the google docs Link for the Butler to Mr. Smith?

Please read from the Google Docs linked in the Magic Window.

Jeanie

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 8th, 2014, 12:48 pm

PL notes for chapter 15:

20:15 Missing line. It says: "fortunately the weather was fine, and Francois _____________ lifted me into the boat."
should be: "Fortunately the weather was fine, and Francois said that surely we would meet an English vessel which would pick us up. I was more dead than alive, and Francois lifted me into the boat."

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 8th, 2014, 2:19 pm

jeanie1914 wrote:Hi, I know this is a dumb question, but since I can't find it, I supose I had better ask, where do I find the google docs Link for the Butler to Mr. Smith?
Please read from the Google Docs linked in the Magic Window.
Jeanie

First of all, that part is in "His Last Bow" so you need to be in the correct project thread!

Then you find out which chapter your character appears in (Chapter 8, from memory but it is written next to the character). In the Magic Window you then scroll down past the character sections and at the bottom you will find text links in purple to the text of each chapter - click on Chapter 8. When the file open you will see a Cast List at the top showing you which colour is yours - read all the lines coded in that colour, including a voice credit for yourself at the start: Butler read by ....

There are no silly questions - as the BC it's my job to help you and keep the project running smoothly!

The link to the other project is in my signature, for convenience!

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » May 8th, 2014, 2:32 pm

Trotsa wrote:PL notes for chapter 19:

12:58 it says "Josephine______________and the boy Jacques..."
should be: Josephine was a pupil-teacher at a young ladies' finishing off school, and the boy, Jacques...
and right after Jacques: 'were', should be was."

13:40, missing paragraph. Should be: 'Whereupon Madame de Fontenay sighed again, and expressed the hope that one day Fate would bring her together with the de Servals.

I PMed Bob and will get this fixed soon. Thanks!

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » May 8th, 2014, 2:33 pm

Trotsa wrote:PL notes for chapter 15:

20:15 Missing line. It says: "fortunately the weather was fine, and Francois _____________ lifted me into the boat."
should be: "Fortunately the weather was fine, and Francois said that surely we would meet an English vessel which would pick us up. I was more dead than alive, and Francois lifted me into the boat."

I PMed Amanda. Thanks!

In the future, it might be helpful if, when you point out a missing line, you say which character's line it is. If you don't know, though, no big deal. I'll figure it out.

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » May 8th, 2014, 3:06 pm

...and here's the corrected Chapter 15 (28:58):

https://librivox.org/uploads/m8b1/triumphofthescarletpimpernel_15_orczy.mp3

Trotsa · Post by **Trotsa** » May 8th, 2014, 3:23 pm

Chapter 15 is spot checked and PL OK!

I'll try to remember that for you. I was going to do it this time, but forgot.

I can see how it would make it much easier for you!

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » May 8th, 2014, 3:25 pm

Thank you, Trotsa!